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Title: Tempted 19 Nov 2009 10:07 pm
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Okay, harry had better NOT listen to that damn voice! That girl reminded me of the girl in Poltergeist . . .ahhh!

    I really liked the idea of the Conduits and that explains why Filch remains at Hogwarts.

    The werewolves were so evil can't wait till they all die!
Title: Tempted 22 Aug 2009 11:10 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    o.0 Bad Dagger! Hope it's destroyed soon or that Severus or Hedwig notice this isn't just him being an pissy but a real problem T_T...the dagger wow I'm so mad at it I have no words to describe it really does seem like a person to me...kill the little girl! muahahaha! XD

    Author's Response: It's meant to seem that way and it really is evil and nobody understands just how evil it is.
Title: Tempted 18 Aug 2009 5:21 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter. Yes, it's angsty, but that's what keeps it all going as it were.

    Author's Response: Yes, it does and there will be more angst to come, a lot more! Thanks for reviewing! :)
Title: Tempted 15 Aug 2009 1:49 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh no! They need to get away from the werewolves and destroy the darn dagger. Before something worse happens. And I have a feeling (again) that something worse WILL happen. Update soon!

    Author's Response: Yes . . .they do and you're right!
Title: Tempted 15 Aug 2009 5:16 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Now that was plain CREEPY! That part with the girl in the garden really scared me, especially when I realized that she was actually the dagger in disguise. It reminded me of the Exorcist! You have one twisted mind!

    I really really hope harry tells Severus about the damn dreams! Loved the Conduits and Filch being one makes so much sense.

    Please update soon, the suspense is killing me!

    Author's Response:

    I do, don't I?

    But then you do too for reminding me of the Exorcist!

    he would if he knew they were something dangerous. I wanted to do something with Filch and that's what came to mind.

    I have updated!!

Title: Tempted 14 Aug 2009 5:59 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    This was the best chapter yet. Filch as a permantly contracted Conduit. This has to be the best reason for his presence at Hogwarts that I have ever come across and it's giving me an idea for a ficlet. If I do write something, I'll be sure to send it to you and ask your permission to post it.

    I know that things are going to get worse before they get better, but I hope that Severus manages to realise what's wrong with Harry soon. Could legilimency recognise what is happening or would that "infect" Severus as well?

    I suppose you can tell that I really like this fic and it is at the top of my favourites list. Bravissimmi!

    Dancingkatz

    Author's Response:

    Cool! I'm glad you like the idea and if you would like to use my idea feel free to and let me know so I can read it.

    Actually, the dagger is so subtle that Harry doesn't even realize yet that he is affected and Severus's Legilimency might be able to detect something was off, but not the fact that it was a curse unless he specifically looked for it.

    Thanks and I'm happy to hear it!

Title: Tempted 14 Aug 2009 2:54 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Intriguing! The way the dagger got to Harry and the Conduits too. Not to mention Harrys thoughts... m.

    Author's Response: Yes, the dagger is very subtle and very dangerous. You can learn more about Conduits later on and Harry's thought are taking a dark turn.
Title: Tempted 14 Aug 2009 2:06 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh I hope Harry tells Severus what is going on .

    Author's Response: he would if he even knew what was happening to him. But he doesn't, he just thinks he's having strange dreams.
Title: Tempted 14 Aug 2009 7:36 am
Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) [Report This]
    Amazing chapter, yet again. *claps* I've always loved Filches character. He is a bit of a mystery.

    Author's Response: he is and I actually did a story with Filch as a pretty major player called Snow Girl and the Sorcerer's Son, which is also posted on here. I made him into actually a kind of good guy.
Title: Tempted 14 Aug 2009 6:41 am
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    *taps a paw impatiently* You like cliffies, don't you? *raises an eyebrow in a sorry immatation of Severus.*

    Author's Response:

    Yes, I do. Suspense!!

    Sev is laughing right now. :)


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