Why?????? Just why???? Help! I'm calling emergency for Sev! Come on! Please!
(In other words, very tense and angsty, and enjoyable.)
Dude! This is gripping! Stupid Harry though. what a nincumpoop! Please don't let him die!
Oh my god! Don't kill Sev! No please! This is really bad! Really bad! Wake up Harry! Wake up!
AHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!
o.o that's all i can say really...stupid princess grr!
Author's Response: yes, she really is a horrible thing . . .considering she's the dagger.
ARRRRRG! *bounces up and down with fustration* You...you...clever author you! >
Author's Response: Scary isn't it? But at least you can read the next chapter now!
Oh, MAN are you in trouble for that one!
Author's Response: Uh oh. Is that a threat? I hope not!
You said in your author's note a couple of chapters back that the Dagger was a lot like Tolkien's The One Ring. Actually, in some ways I think the Dagger is worse than that. It's definitely literally bloodthirsty and while the Ring just messed with its bearer's mind, it's prime directive was to get itself back to it's Master ASAP. From what I can see the Dagger is Evil made physically manifest, evil that specifically wants bloodshed. I can see more than a couple ways things could go from here but I'm betting you are going to surprise me yet again. Excellent imagery and characterization as always. Bravo!
Author's Response: yes, you are absolutely right. The Dagger is much wickeder than the One Ring and it lives to kill and subvert innocents. Harry really had no defense against it, it was made even more powerful by Voldy putting a piece of his corrupt soul into it. Hope you like how things continue!
| Title: Fallen
| 16 Aug 2009 6:33 pm
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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How does Sev protect himself against the daggar? Please don't keep us waiting to long to find out. Great chapter. When do they get to hogwarts?
Author's Response: He couldn't. They might not get there just yet. I have just updated.
Nooooooo!
Author's Response: Terrible, isn't it?
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