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Title: Witherspoon's Rescue 21 Aug 2009 2:29 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh we need Severus so don't let him die, and yes I think that Harry could brew and destroy the cursed thing just out of his love for Severus. Wonderful by the way!

    Author's Response: Thank you1 And you're right, Harry's love for Severus will help him a great deal. I have updated again, BTW.
Title: Witherspoon's Rescue 21 Aug 2009 9:03 am
Reviewer: MilkaZen (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm sure that with such an incentive Harry will brew the Curse Dissolving Poton perfectly lol
    I think that the most he will be able to do is to convince Hedwig to drop the dagger in the potion lol

    Thanks

    Author's Response:

    Oh yes, he will prove himself next chapter.

    Hedwig will require a good deal of convincing given what the dagger has done to harry.

Title: Witherspoon's Rescue 21 Aug 2009 7:42 am
Reviewer: llpi (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wouldn't the wiser plan be to have Hedwig, who seems to be immune to the dagger, be the one to drop the dagger into the cauldron of curse dissolving potion? That way Harry doesn't need to touch it again. He could even be tied up or magically immobilized to observe so that he can't try to get it from her.

    Author's Response: Hedwig is not really immune to the dagger, but she handles the dagger's influence well since she is an animal.  Yes, that could work.  Or it could happen differently.
Title: Witherspoon's Rescue 21 Aug 2009 7:07 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful as usual. I have so enjoyed this series.....poor Harry.....poor Sev....very good rescue. They should have taken Jace with them on this trip, then no problems with the weres! LOL I love Grace already, so kind and talented. Can't wait for the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Yes, they should have, except Jace couldn't fly as a hawk.  And who knew the weres were going to be so much trouble! Grace will be Harry's lifeline soon enough.
Title: Witherspoon's Rescue 21 Aug 2009 6:57 am
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Pheew! That was close! Fantastic job though. I liked the idea of stasis cloak.

    Maybe if Harry makes the potion first and then talks to Hedwig about giving him the dagger? That might work. Grace can help Harry with the potion too.

    I really liked the way you have described the Witherspoon house. It brings back memories of peace and healing. Bravo!

    Author's Response:

    Good because I had to come up with something to keep Sev alive long enough for the potion to brew.

    Yes, that could work. Grace would be very willing to help him.

    I'm glad you liked the house, I wasn't sure if I did a good job with it or not.

Title: Witherspoon's Rescue 21 Aug 2009 6:41 am
Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) [Report This]
    Sev'll be okay, he has to be. *cries*

    Author's Response: Harry will try his best to make him well.
Title: Witherspoon's Rescue 21 Aug 2009 6:27 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, now at least there's hope for Severus. I really hope that Hedwig can be convinced to let him have the dagger.

    Great chapter, and you've made me feel a little better, that there's still hope for Severus. I just hope that Harry can heal now, because guilt is going to ravish Harry. How will he ever get over almost killing Severus. Poor boy. Either way, rough times are ahead for Harry.

    Author's Response:

    She may take a bit more convincing than you'd think. 

    Yes, hope is now rising for Severus.

    Oh yes, that guilt is going to really hurt him, unless Severus is healed and convinces him to let it go, which will not be an easy thing.


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