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Reviews For Two Hawks Hunting
Author's Response: Thank you1 And you're right, Harry's love for Severus will help him a great deal. I have updated again, BTW.
I think that the most he will be able to do is to convince Hedwig to drop the dagger in the potion lol Thanks Author's Response: Oh yes, he will prove himself next chapter. Hedwig will require a good deal of convincing given what the dagger has done to harry.
Author's Response: Hedwig is not really immune to the dagger, but she handles the dagger's influence well since she is an animal. Yes, that could work. Or it could happen differently.
Author's Response: Yes, they should have, except Jace couldn't fly as a hawk. And who knew the weres were going to be so much trouble! Grace will be Harry's lifeline soon enough.
Maybe if Harry makes the potion first and then talks to Hedwig about giving him the dagger? That might work. Grace can help Harry with the potion too. I really liked the way you have described the Witherspoon house. It brings back memories of peace and healing. Bravo! Author's Response: Good because I had to come up with something to keep Sev alive long enough for the potion to brew. Yes, that could work. Grace would be very willing to help him. I'm glad you liked the house, I wasn't sure if I did a good job with it or not.
Author's Response: Harry will try his best to make him well.
Great chapter, and you've made me feel a little better, that there's still hope for Severus. I just hope that Harry can heal now, because guilt is going to ravish Harry. How will he ever get over almost killing Severus. Poor boy. Either way, rough times are ahead for Harry. Author's Response: She may take a bit more convincing than you'd think. Yes, hope is now rising for Severus. Oh yes, that guilt is going to really hurt him, unless Severus is healed and convinces him to let it go, which will not be an easy thing. |
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