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Reviews For Two Hawks Hunting
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
I love little Jilly! And the potion-brewing was great--I love how he could imagine Sev's comments and reactions and such. And Jace is Jace. What a great character. :-) And I think he should just have Hedwig carry the dagger and drop it into the dose of potion so he doesn't get near it again. It will still influence him if he gets close to it once more, I would think. That way, she'd not have to trust him with the dagger, either, which she knows better than to do. Then again, it's YOUR story... Author's Response: I wanted him to feel some connection to Sev while he was brewing, to show how much he has learned, even unconsciously from him. It deepens their relationship. I'm so glad you like Jilly and Jace, they are two of my favorite OC's. Thank you for your suggestion, you will see what they do with the dagger next chapter, which is posted.
Author's Response: Thank you! And I agree, Jilly will help both of them more than she knows!
Author's Response: A very good idea and I thank you for your support. The next one has been posted.
Author's Response: That's a really good idea and I shall consider it. I have the next chapter posted so you can see what becomes of the dagger. Thank you for all your reviews. Harry has indeed learned from the best in the field. And you're right, he could become Sev's equal in time.
Author's Response: Thanks! Sometimes Jilly imitates the speech of her elders and other times she lapses back into the speech of a two-year-old. I've seen this happen with my small nephews. It might seem strange, but it's because they're learning how to talk right and copy people. And she is a very bright young child, plus her Talent lets her understand things which a child her age often can't.
Author's Response: Good idea! Thank you!
Author's Response: yes she does! Hedwig is not as insensitive to Harry's feelings as she seems, she knows he is very upset but at the same time is afraid the dagger will influence him again. But next chapter Harry will attempt to convince her he is all right.
Author's Response: That's true and the next chapter will be about Harry regaining her trust. I'm glad you liked this one, but the next one will be pretty tense. |
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