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Title: A True Apprentice 25 Aug 2009 3:30 am
Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes! Go Harry! I am really proud of that little bonehead. I think he should show Hedwig the potion and have her drop it in, so he cannot touch it. Maybe have him not even be there, but be with Grace, working on saving Severus the moment it is destroyed.

    Author's Response: Good idea! Harry is really showing his true colors here and he'll show them even more next chapter. Thanks for your suggestion.
Title: A True Apprentice 24 Aug 2009 9:37 pm
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    whoops Jace found out, but his little sister didn't sense any dark about Harry? Maybe it's only active when the dagger is around? I really loved this scene:

    "Back to clean up. Severus would have my hide if I left his lab like that," Harry said, then froze. This was not Severus's lab and he was not watching his apprentice, waiting for him to remember his instructions. A sudden pang of sorrow smote him and he felt tears sting his eyes.

    It made me feel sorry for Harry, for a moment there nothing seemed out of place until he realized that this wasn't where he thought he was. =(
    I hope everything will be alright, please update when you can!
    *runs off to find a blanket* it's getting cold again T_T

    Author's Response: Yes, that scene really was heartbreaking. But perhaps things shall work out. You'll see next chapter.  As for Harry and the dagger, it'll be resolved next chapter as well.
Title: A True Apprentice 24 Aug 2009 2:26 pm
Reviewer: Phoenix1 (Signed) [Report This]
    I think Hedwig should make Harry bring the cauldron outside so that she can go get and then drop the dagger directly into the cauldron so Harry never has to touch it.

    Author's Response: Thanks for your idea, funny but a lot of people have suggested that. If you read the next chapter you'll see what becomes of the dagger and Harry and Sev.
Title: A True Apprentice 24 Aug 2009 11:55 am
Reviewer: MilkaZen (Signed) [Report This]
    I think the best way about it is to ask Hedwig to drop the dagger in the potion lol

    Thanks for the chapter.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review and your idea!
Title: A True Apprentice 24 Aug 2009 7:24 am
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter. Especially how it shows that Harry is maturing and how he reacts to different people in the witherspoon household. Hope Severus will wake up soon.

    Author's Response: Thanks and Severus will be doing just that next chapter, which should be up shortly.
Title: A True Apprentice 24 Aug 2009 7:05 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw Jilly is so cute. She sensed Harry's pain. How sweet.

    Oh, Jace knows now, and he doesn't judge Harry. I'm glad. Harry doesn't need to feel anymore guilt.

    I really hope that Harry can convince Hedwig to let him destroy the dagger.

    Great chapter, I have tears in my eyes. I'm so sad for Harry. He needs Sev. back

    Author's Response:

    She really is and she'll help Severus too!

    No, he's not that kind of person. Jace is very self contained and mature for his age, it comes from being a reader. Yes, he does and he will get him back.


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