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Title: A Reader's Advice 23 Jul 2011 7:43 am
Reviewer: Dee (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hello, I just wanted to say you have always been my favorite fanfiction author, and I hope you continue to come up with more stories. Thank you for writing them.
Title: A Reader's Advice 06 May 2010 1:05 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    He definitely needs to talk with Severus and I hope he can manage to do so. It's important that Sev forgives him and Harry knows it. I look forward to the next chapter.
Title: A Reader's Advice 09 Sep 2009 6:57 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah; where is the legendary Gryffndors' bravery? M.

    Author's Response: He's lost it for now. But it'll resurface. He's very lost and guilt ridden now.
Title: A Reader's Advice 08 Sep 2009 5:36 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Not much of one. No sense of urgancy usually attatched to cliffies.

    Author's Response: No, this one was not the ahhh! variety. But next chapter will be every emtional.
Title: A Reader's Advice 07 Sep 2009 7:55 pm
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    It's about stinkin' time they talk. ;-) Poor Harry must be shaking in his boots with that hand on his shoulder...

    Author's Response: Yes, Harry's delayed long enough. And he really is scared that Sev will tell him to take a hike. But you'll see what happens next chapter, which I've posted.
Title: A Reader's Advice 07 Sep 2009 8:27 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Finally, Severus got to Harry. I was going mad that Harry kept flying way from him. Can't wait to read the next post. Love the story.

    Author's Response: Yes, Harry was being very difficult. You can read it now, since I've just posted! Thanks!
Title: A Reader's Advice 07 Sep 2009 6:19 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Finally, the talk is going to proceed! I can't wait to read it. But I loved how all the others were trying to persuade stubborn Harry to talk to Sev and how Harry was so certain Sev wouldn't forgive him. That's a typical Gryffindor mindset, they see the world in black and white for the most part or their own narrow vision.

    Jilly is adorable, I love her, and Grace's advice was perfect.

    Update soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks and I agree, Gryffindors are very stubborn and very opinionated. You'll see more Jilly later and I have just updated again!
Title: A Reader's Advice 07 Sep 2009 2:53 am
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Looking forward to the next chapter, though to be honest, this one seems a bit like a filler.

    Author's Response:

    Well, it does need to be in here, because I wanted to show just how bad Harry was avoiding Severus and how it was affecting him and the rest of the Witherspoons. I didn;t want it to seem like the Witherspoons weren't aware of what was going on or that they didn;t care about what was happening with Harry and Sev. Pluse I wanted to stress how sick Severus was and why he didn't go after Harry himself once he awoke fully. I know it's frustrating waiting for Harry to stop running away and talk to Snape, but Harry is so stubborn and this seemed like the best way to illustrate it.

    And the next part's up now!

Title: A Reader's Advice 07 Sep 2009 1:09 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    Those darn cliffies!
    Don't leave us hanging long!

    Author's Response: Okay I won't! I've just posted the next one!
Title: A Reader's Advice 06 Sep 2009 11:34 pm
Reviewer: Alifromnm (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Another wonderful chapter. Can't wait for the next one and the rital!!

    Author's Response: Thanks! I have updated so you can see what happens.

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