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Title: A Reader's Advice 06 Sep 2009 10:34 pm
Reviewer: Sheila (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Finally - I'm soo looking forward to their talk!!! Great chapter!! Please update soon.

    Author's Response: I have just updated, so go and read what happens next!
Title: A Reader's Advice 06 Sep 2009 8:43 pm
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    lol Jilly is so funny and cute. :)
    Harry very very stubborn child that he is, hopefully this talk will go well!

    Author's Response: Oh yes, he sure is! And the talk will be surprising, I hope.
Title: A Reader's Advice 06 Sep 2009 7:20 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay im glad that Severus is finally strong enough to go to Harry, it didnt seem like Harry had any intention of facing him anytime soon lol, im looking forward to their chat :)

    Author's Response: No, Harry would have preferred finding a deep hole to hide in rather than face Sev. You can see their talk now as I have posted the next part.
Title: A Reader's Advice 06 Sep 2009 7:13 pm
Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) [Report This]
    Eh eh eh eh eh eh eh eh?! WHAT?! YOU JUST GIVE US A CLIFFIE?! ARGH!!! Nos!! *sobs* Well, I liked that chapter (EXCEPT FOR THE CLIFFIE)!

    Well done, please hurry to get more out!

    Author's Response: I will and I am! Go and see!
Title: A Reader's Advice 06 Sep 2009 4:56 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, poor Harry. The guilt is going to strangle him. How's he ever going to get past this. I really hope that this ritual can make Severus and Harry whole again, and not feel like they're tainted.

    I love little Jilly, and Severus' thoughts about regretting not having a little daughter, was just too precious. Very sweet.

    I loved this chapter. You just really captured Severus' and Harry's emotions so well. I can just "feel" Harry's guilt, and Severus' confusion.

    Yes, a cliffie again!!! Oh well (she sighs) I guess that you'll just have to get those little fingers of yours writing, and pronto!! Please?

    Author's Response:

    Yes, Harry always has a tough time with his guilty conscience, especially given what he did to Severus.  The ritual is designed to do just that, if Sev can ever get Harry alone to perform it.

    Yes, but you know, if Severus ever got back together with Thea maybe he could have a daughter. It's something to think about. For a future story.

    Oh good, I struggled with this and worried that it wasn't descriptive enough.

    Well, I have updated again! So now you can get to reading, Pandora and thanks!

Title: A Reader's Advice 06 Sep 2009 3:28 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, what a great chapter! Poor Harry, so much guilt and turmoil. I hope Severus is understanding and uses that ritual to help both of them. Update soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks and the next chapter has been posted so you can see how Sev reacts and what the ritual is like.
Title: A Reader's Advice 06 Sep 2009 2:50 pm
Reviewer: MilkaZen (Signed) [Report This]
    Just the talk or something about a ritual too?

    Thanks for the chapter. I hope the talk goes without too much hurt ^_^

    Author's Response: No, the ritual will be in there. That's a major part of the next chappie. Thanks for reviewing!

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