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Reviews For Two Hawks Hunting
Author's Response: I have just updated, so go and read what happens next!
Harry very very stubborn child that he is, hopefully this talk will go well! Author's Response: Oh yes, he sure is! And the talk will be surprising, I hope.
Author's Response: No, Harry would have preferred finding a deep hole to hide in rather than face Sev. You can see their talk now as I have posted the next part.
Well done, please hurry to get more out! Author's Response: I will and I am! Go and see!
I love little Jilly, and Severus' thoughts about regretting not having a little daughter, was just too precious. Very sweet. I loved this chapter. You just really captured Severus' and Harry's emotions so well. I can just "feel" Harry's guilt, and Severus' confusion. Yes, a cliffie again!!! Oh well (she sighs) I guess that you'll just have to get those little fingers of yours writing, and pronto!! Please? Author's Response: Yes, Harry always has a tough time with his guilty conscience, especially given what he did to Severus. The ritual is designed to do just that, if Sev can ever get Harry alone to perform it. Yes, but you know, if Severus ever got back together with Thea maybe he could have a daughter. It's something to think about. For a future story. Oh good, I struggled with this and worried that it wasn't descriptive enough. Well, I have updated again! So now you can get to reading, Pandora and thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks and the next chapter has been posted so you can see how Sev reacts and what the ritual is like.
Thanks for the chapter. I hope the talk goes without too much hurt ^_^ Author's Response: No, the ritual will be in there. That's a major part of the next chappie. Thanks for reviewing! |
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