| Title: The Ritual of Renewal
| 09 Jun 2011 9:46 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Err... Okay. I really am not that huge a fan of rituals that include asking blessings from a form that is not God. Like the elements. It just doesn't feel right.
That ritual was amazing! I felt like I was there. And it really helped them both. I loved how they finally talked and forgave each other! So sweet!
| Title: The Ritual of Renewal
| 12 Sep 2009 7:51 pm
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| Reviewer: Rebel_Dream (Anonymous)
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wow. loved it. can not wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks, hope you enjoy the rest.
| Title: The Ritual of Renewal
| 12 Sep 2009 7:51 pm
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| Reviewer: Rebel_Dream (Anonymous)
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wow. loved it. can not wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
An interesting ritual! M.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you thought so! And it's a real one, though not exactly as I've written it. You don't need to get wet for one.
Loved it! It made me cry. So sorry to hear about your losses. But please keep writing.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I will, don't worry.
I am in tears. Tears, tears which can be healing, joyful, sorrowful, or everything at once. Best chapter yet.
So sorry to hear about out summer. My thoughts and prayers go out to you girlfriend. Even though we have never met, by your writings I feel I know a bit about the woman behind the words. Loving, loyal, and wishing goodness for and on everyone she meets. Blessed be your works, your days, and your family.
Author's Response: Thanks so much1 I am very touched by this review and I really appreciate you saying that. It has been a hard summer for my and my family, but hopefully we shall continue to get through it. It's all we can do. And I am glad that my stories have touched you so deeply. Again, thank you!
| Title: The Ritual of Renewal
| 09 Sep 2009 5:50 am
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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Wow! This was so moving. I could see and feel everything they were doing. It made me cry at the end. But I'm happy they're back together and can't wait to see what happens next! Beautiful chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Gorgeous! I am crying myself as I type this (where did I put those tissues?). May I suggest adding a hankie warning?
Bravo!
Dancingkatz
Author's Response: Thanks! I really should post one, since I was crying when I wrote it. But then, sometimes I'm overly emotional about my work.
Beautiful ritual. What a tear-jerker of a chapter. Good thing my office door is closed...what? oh, yeah, I probably ought NOT to be reading fanfic at work. Couldn't resist when I'd read your reply to my review that you'd posted another chapter already, though. ;-)
Author's Response: yes, I think I should have warned people. But when I finished it I was crying too. I'm glad you find my work compelling enough to read even if you shouldn't. That really makes my day.
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