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Reviews For Two Hawks Hunting
And I wouldn't mind a change of VP. Sometimes you need to change focus. The Very Hungry Caterpillar is my fave!!
Author's Response: Aww, that's so cute! That's okay, take your time! I appreciate you reviewing.
Things are beginning to pick up again, they never seem to ever catch a break lol! Author's Response: I don't know . . .maybe they wouldn't know it because no one ever read it to them? No, there's always something going on.
Author's Response: You'd be right. Thanks because that's just what you're going to get for about five chapters or so.
But now I'm worried about the other four kids and Albus. Lucius and Bella are very evil and not to be trusted. Author's Response: One of my favorites too! Yes, they are in trouble and need help. Read the next part to find out how it all occurred.
Cant wait to see everyones point of view on how and when they were kidnapped :) Author's Response: Mine too! I loved that story. I used to read it to my pre-schoolers and also the kids who came for storytime at B &N. Such a wonderful story, it's a classic. I figured Jilly and Sev could benefit from it. That part's posted now!
Author's Response: Yes, they do and that's such an important part of this story. The next chappie's up!
Author's Response: You hope so, right? But maybe not. Those DE are nasty people and they like hurting those in their power.
That little Jilly is just a sweetheart, isn't she? So sweet. Oh no!!! Hermione and the others! I hope that they're going to be alright! Good chappie Snapegirl, but I'm dying for the next one to find out more about Hermione and the others. Author's Response: It has done that and Harry's guilt is now easier to bear because of it. I just love Jilly, she's based off my little great-niece Natalie. They are in a bit of a tight spot now, and the next part has been posted!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and I will always post on this one as well as ff.net. |
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