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Title: Sojourn 06 May 2010 1:11 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww I just love the Witherspoon family! Specially Jilly and Grace, they're so sweet and cute! Sev and Harry could really use a rest.

    And I wouldn't mind a change of VP. Sometimes you need to change focus.

    The Very Hungry Caterpillar is my fave!!
Title: Sojourn 20 Nov 2009 12:37 am
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    i had the very hungry caterpillar as a child and i brought my honary nephew the book aswell, great chapter, my reviews will be short as i need to catch up on your fics

    Author's Response: Aww, that's so cute! That's okay, take your time! I appreciate you reviewing.
Title: Sojourn 18 Sep 2009 4:08 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    I love that book how can someone NOT recognize it?! As soon as I heard a caterpillar with red head I laughed. :D One of the first books I ever read!

    Things are beginning to pick up again, they never seem to ever catch a break lol!

    Author's Response:

    I don't know . . .maybe they wouldn't know it because no one ever read it to them?

    No, there's always something going on. 

Title: Sojourn 16 Sep 2009 2:41 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww, such a sweet chapter! I loved the bonding moment, but I get the feeling that now is the calm before the storm. I would love to see a different POV, much as I love Harry and Severus.

    Author's Response: You'd be right.  Thanks because that's just what you're going to get for about five chapters or so.
Title: Sojourn 16 Sep 2009 4:39 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Great choice of book1 My son loved that book when he was that age. I love how Severus is with Jilly and Harry and how Harry has managed to shelve his guilt over Severus for now.

    But now I'm worried about the other four kids and Albus. Lucius and Bella are very evil and not to be trusted.

    Author's Response: One of my favorites too! Yes, they are in trouble and need help.  Read the next part to find out how it all occurred.
Title: Sojourn 15 Sep 2009 10:57 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh kidnappings! exciting stuff lol, I loved the part with Severus reading to Jilly, that was my all time favourite story as a child and was a firm favourite with my nursery key group children as well, they all knew it off by heart :)
    Cant wait to see everyones point of view on how and when they were kidnapped :)

    Author's Response: Mine too! I loved that story. I used to read it to my pre-schoolers and also the kids who came for storytime at B &N.  Such a wonderful story, it's a classic.  I figured Jilly and Sev could benefit from it.  That part's posted now!
Title: Sojourn 15 Sep 2009 8:58 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    My favorite part of this chapter is that sev and harry feel like father and son. About time harry feels love. Cant'wait for next chapter to understand what happened with the kidnapping.

    Author's Response: Yes, they do and that's such an important part of this story.  The next chappie's up!
Title: Sojourn 15 Sep 2009 4:11 am
Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) [Report This]
    -Twitch twitch- heh heh heheh. Okay. Everybody's gonna be okay. Heh. Heheh.

    Author's Response: You hope so, right? But maybe not. Those DE are nasty people and they like hurting those in their power.
Title: Sojourn 15 Sep 2009 3:55 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, that ritual seems to have filled Harry and Severus with peace and erased Harry's guilt. I'm so glad.

    That little Jilly is just a sweetheart, isn't she? So sweet.

    Oh no!!! Hermione and the others! I hope that they're going to be alright!

    Good chappie Snapegirl, but I'm dying for the next one to find out more about Hermione and the others.

    Author's Response:

    It has done that and Harry's guilt is now easier to bear because of it.

    I just love Jilly, she's based off my little great-niece Natalie.

    They are in a bit of a tight spot now, and the next part has been posted!

Title: Sojourn 15 Sep 2009 3:41 am
Reviewer: charmedlily (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Thankyou for telling me about this site, the next time ff.net gives me a problem with your story I'll remember to come here. Keep up the good work! - Charmedlily

    Author's Response: Thanks for reading and I will always post on this one as well as ff.net.

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