| Title: Sojourn
| 14 Sep 2009 10:25 pm
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| Reviewer: alifromnm (Anonymous)
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WOW! You got me there! I though this chapter would be a happy one since the rital of the last chapter was so intense, but BAM right between the eyes. Keep up the wonderful work!!! This was worth using my lunch for!
Author's Response: Thanks! So glad you liked it! I hope you like the next one too!
Their back. Argh!!! Cliffies are the worst. Very clever chapter btw :P.
Author's Response: Thanks! And I see you've seen Poltergeist. Now that movie was scary!
| Title: Sojourn
| 14 Sep 2009 9:27 pm
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| Reviewer: DS (Anonymous)
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Wow! This turn of events was totally unexpected! I hope Dumbledore will survive the ordeal and along with others or even the victory will be tainted. Fudge will be out of control without Dumbledore and the redemption for the wolfen would be near impossible.
Will wait eagerly for the next chapters..
Author's Response: You're right. Victory would be tainted if Dumbledore dies, since Fudge would never listen to Harry or Severus. More has been posted.
What a funny children's book :-) I am curious to hear the stories of the kidnapped teens. Mila
Author's Response: Yeah it's one of my favorites. teach kids about numbers and food and caterpillars as well as colors too. It's a highly regarded preschool book over here in the USA. The story of the kidnapped teens will be posted next!
Brilliant, brilliant. Oh, just to let you know - FF.net has something going on over the last few days and this particular chapter of yours did not come through this morning. You might want to attempt a repost over there.
Cheers!
Zara
Author's Response: Thanks! It did finally post over there, just so you know. It showed up on my account but not some others.
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