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Title: The Death Eaters Strike Back 06 May 2010 6:52 pm
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Well I was wondering when they would come back into the picture! And here they are. the baddest of the bad. Poor kids I hope Dumbledore gets them out soon!
Title: The Death Eaters Strike Back 16 Feb 2010 7:25 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    I like your Lion King reference. I think Scar would be a prettier hearth rug though.

    Creepy, I like it.
Title: The Death Eaters Strike Back 20 Nov 2009 1:01 am
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    is that the same catacombs that sev and harry are going to visit, the chamber of secrets, i have always wondered if there is more than one entrance, if thats the case they will be in deep trouble. the death eaters are getting smarter in what they are doing

    Author's Response: Yes it is the same. And Lucius isn't stupid, and Bella might be crazy but she's not dumb either.
Title: The Death Eaters Strike Back 27 Sep 2009 6:48 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh they are so evil! I really hope they pay for what they did. Those poor kids. I hope they don't hurt them too much before someone rescues them. They will be rescued, won't they?

    Author's Response:

    They are and they will pay eventually.

    As for your last question  . . .wait and see.

Title: The Death Eaters Strike Back 27 Sep 2009 6:42 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    This was a very frightening chapter. I feel really bad for the kids and hope that Lucius and Bella and their allies get it good in the end. Great job! Good luck with the fest fic!

    Author's Response: Thanks! It was, but then again, any kidnapping would be.  Oh they will trust me on that.
Title: The Death Eaters Strike Back 23 Sep 2009 6:59 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Another wonderful chapter!! Poor kids!! Why Hermine though? She has no important parents and a muggleborn at that. Can't wait for your update!

    Author's Response: Thanks! Hermione was picked because she's a Muggleborn and Harry's friend, they know that it would really hurt Harry if something happened to her and also because Bella hates Muggleborns.
Title: The Death Eaters Strike Back 22 Sep 2009 9:40 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg!!! :O


    Poor Crookshanks, and how awful for all the children. I hope that Sev and Harry will be able to find and rescue them. I'm anxious to see some news of our boys too!

    Great chappie, I really enjoyed your descriptions of each of their homes. Well done.

    Ooh, I'm looking forward to reading your fic for the prompt fest, but I greedily want another chappie of this and want to read more of old violet eyes too!

    I haven't even started my fic yet!!! :O

    Ooh, and I'm off to read your next chappie of Ariadne too, which I'm really enjoying BTW!!!

    Author's Response:

    Poor Crookshanks indeed, although he's not dead. 

    Sev and Harry's POV will be coming up in a few more chapters. 

    The descriptions of their homes were hard to write about since I had to think about what everything might look like. 

    I should be posting another chapter of this really soon. 

    I'm now working on TWO fics for the PF, one I wrote by myself and the other with RaeKelly.

    So glad you're enjoying all my stories. 

Title: The Death Eaters Strike Back 22 Sep 2009 8:07 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Interesting chapter, it was good to see how it all happened :)

    Author's Response: Thanks! I should be posting more soon! Like tomorrow!
Title: The Death Eaters Strike Back 22 Sep 2009 7:57 pm
Reviewer: kayt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Nice to get some background detail to round out the more minor characters. Can I be pedantic on a tiny point though - as Somerset is a county in the West of England, shouldn't Hermione live either in Somerset, or near a large city like Bath (or maybe that's just a culture difference thing).

    Author's Response: Thanks! I kind of pictured Hermione living in a small town near a larger one.  She didn't really seem like a city girl to me. 
Title: The Death Eaters Strike Back 22 Sep 2009 3:27 pm
Reviewer: Starbuck1332 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    What is "Prompt" Fest?

    Author's Response: It's the new contest on here at Potions and Snitches. I'm going to be entered twice, one story I wrote myself and the other I co-authored.

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