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Title: The Mastery of Fear 06 May 2010 7:01 pm
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow that was intense! And I feel really bad for Albus. Bellatrix and Lucius deserve to die. I loved how he talked to his sister and Lily in the garden too! Way cool!
Title: The Mastery of Fear 16 Feb 2010 8:15 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    I like how you made him live through the torture he put others through. I have nothing more to add, I just hope all goes well.
Title: The Mastery of Fear 16 Feb 2010 8:12 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    I like how you made him live through the torture he put others through. I have nothing more to add, I just hope all goes well.
Title: The Mastery of Fear 20 Nov 2009 1:39 am
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    does a happy dance with snapegirl before reviewing, but succombs to another bout of happy dancing

    now do iu feel sorry for dumbles, well no as he brought this punishment on himself, beleiving the deth eaters, i wouldn't trust them as far as i could throw them, they only think of themselves, buit saying that i think peter may help dumbles somehow and try and redeem himself

    Author's Response:

    Hahaha!

    You're right, Albus made a big mistake, but he did do it for the right reasons.

    As for Peter . . .ah, I don't want to ruin the surprise.

Title: The Mastery of Fear 08 Oct 2009 7:32 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! That was a very moving chapter. I liked it, even though it made me shudder. Don't let Albus die! Then his redemption would be meaningless. Can't wait for the next one!

    Author's Response: Thanks very much! As for Albus dying . . .I can't say yes or no at this point, you'll just have to read onward.
Title: The Mastery of Fear 08 Oct 2009 7:21 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    This is great! I think you really captured the nature of scarifice and Dumbledore's remorse for what he has done is truly felt, no half measures. It's true what they say--you never know how someone feels until you take a walk in their shoes. And he's definitely done that here. Marvelous! Post again soon!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm so glad you liked this one. You're so right, and Albus has, unfortunately learned this lesson the hard way. 
Title: The Mastery of Fear 07 Oct 2009 12:20 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful chapter as usual. Nice scene with Albus's sister and Lily.....maybe there is hope of the old man yet.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! There could be hope for him, you'll see in time!
Title: The Mastery of Fear 06 Oct 2009 1:08 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my God. that was really an intense chapter. I've got tears in my eyes.

    Yes, it was beautifully written, but hard to read. I had a rough weekend, and the week's not going so well either, so this chapter really hit the old tear buckets.

    Well done SG, please update soon.

    Oh, and I'm really enjoying Ariadne. Everyone should go check it out. You've made me interested in Greek Mythology, and I love your twist on it.

    Author's Response:

    Aww! Sorry I made you cry. 

    Yay, for reading Ariadne! I'm so glad you're reading it and enjoying it, especially because Greek Mythology is one of my passions, I minored in it in college and love the old tales.

Title: The Mastery of Fear 06 Oct 2009 1:05 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Although it was a rather dark depressing chapter for Albus I definatly think it was necessary to show just how sorry he is and to be able to say that he now knows just what Severus and Harry have had to go through in their lives, it was well written :)

    Author's Response: Thanks! I had hoped people would feel that way about it, because sometimes one has to suffer through their own "dark night" to really understand the suffering of others. 
Title: The Mastery of Fear 06 Oct 2009 7:08 am
Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) [Report This]
    This is really a moving chapter about Albus finding himself, finally.

    Author's Response: yeah it is and I think it was necessary to have it here, so people can see just what it takes for the old man to redeem himself.

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