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Reviews For Two Hawks Hunting
Author's Response: yeah you got that right. Lucius and Narcissa are in this together, she wanted to participate in the ritual.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Now I feel more confident and can get on with writing the next chapter.
Author's Response: I don't think those four would sit tamely by and just wait to be rescued. They don't seem the type. Yeah, I really don't like Pettigrew and was happy to kill him. More Harry and Sevvy is up now!
Author's Response: Yes they are, and it's almost like a landslide. Harry and Sev are back, just read the next chapter to see.
Author's Response: me too! I really liked exploring the other characters and they'll be getting a few more pages later on. I wanted to show that Dumbledore can change, if he wants to, but he has to want to. Yes, he will finally be the man he has always thought he was if he lives through this. And so will everyone else, excepting the bad guys. Thanks and I'm really happy that you like what I did with everyone.
The children all have their own distinct personality, and Crabbe in particular is consistent with the character you gave him earlier on. Author's Response: Thanks very much and now you can read the next part--it has Harry and Severus in it, as promised.
I loved what Vera did to wormtail, a good way for such a sneaky little rat to die! she is one cool familiar :D Author's Response: Yes, she sure is! Oh good, because I wasn't sure if I was portraying them correctly, thanks for letting me know. |
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