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Title: Dwellers In the Cruicible 06 May 2010 7:06 pm
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Woohoo, Wormtail's DEAD1 Yay1 Go Vera!! I love that snake, and normally I don't like them. But she's way cool! I loved how they all had some kind of talent necessary to getting them out of there. Hope it works! This is such a great story.
Title: Dwellers In the Cruicible 20 Feb 2010 10:05 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    You did a good job on writing the others. I especially like Vera's portrayl. No better fate for that little rat then to be killed as one. I think Tom should have given him to Nagini long ago. You can't trust a traitor not to betray you in turn. Kudos on a well written few chapters.
Title: Dwellers In the Cruicible 16 Feb 2010 8:32 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    The rat is dead the rat is dead! I wrote a fic where Pettigrew was fed to an owl once.
Title: Dwellers In the Cruicible 20 Nov 2009 1:49 am
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    well there goes my theory of wormtail redeeming himself, but a dead death eater is a good death eater, but lucius using his wife in a ritual, where she will probably die and i thought he did care a little bit for her

    Author's Response: yeah you got that right. Lucius and Narcissa are in this together, she wanted to participate in the ritual.
Title: Dwellers In the Cruicible 12 Oct 2009 4:25 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    I think you're doing a great job with the other characters. All the children come across with their own personalities. I just love Vince in this story! Lucius is a cold wicked thing and Bella is just plain scary, reminds me of the mom in Psycho. The way you killed Wormtail was the best though!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! Now I feel more confident and can get on with writing the next chapter. 
Title: Dwellers In the Cruicible 12 Oct 2009 4:18 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved how you had all the children working together to plot an escape route, instead of just sitting about whining. Good for them! I also loved the way Vera handled that rat. Such a wicked death for a wicked individual! Kudos! But I can't wait for more Harry and Sevvy!

    Author's Response: I don't think those four would sit tamely by and just wait to be rescued.  They don't seem the type.  Yeah, I really don't like Pettigrew and was happy to kill him.  More Harry and Sevvy is up now!
Title: Dwellers In the Cruicible 12 Oct 2009 6:48 am
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    o.o wow things are happening fast. can't wait for harry and sev to come into the picture again i think they need to kick some serious butt!

    Author's Response:

    Yes they are, and it's almost like a landslide. 

    Harry and Sev are back, just read the next chapter to see.   

     

Title: Dwellers In the Cruicible 11 Oct 2009 7:20 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, go Vera! Thank goodness Pettigrew finally got what was coming to him. And I like the idea of Lucius skinning Greyback and dancing on his pelt just so he gets hit with a deadly spell immediately afterwards. I'm glad you've given us these two latest chapters as I was wondering what was going on with the others and I love what you've done with Vince. He's really blossoming into a wonderful young man. And I should have reviewed and told you this yesterday but my internet provider was not cooperating: I love what you've done with Dumbledore. All the characters are doing a lot of self-discovery here and it's so good to see him changing from a manipulating (if well intentioned) director who has everyone else take the risks and make the sacrifices. He's going to finally e a great man as well as a great wizard if he makes it through this alive. I hope he will but I'm not going to make any presuppositions about what you have planned. I'm looking forward to your next installment. Cheers!

    Author's Response: me too! I really liked exploring the other characters and they'll be getting a few more pages later on.  I wanted to show that Dumbledore can change, if he wants to, but he has to want to. Yes, he will finally be the man he has always thought he was if he lives through this. And so will everyone else, excepting the bad guys.  Thanks and I'm really happy that you like what I did with everyone. 
Title: Dwellers In the Cruicible 11 Oct 2009 6:56 pm
Reviewer: kayt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Excellent dispatch of Wormtail!
    The children all have their own distinct personality, and Crabbe in particular is consistent with the character you gave him earlier on.

    Author's Response: Thanks very much and now you can read the next part--it has Harry and Severus in it, as promised.
Title: Dwellers In the Cruicible 11 Oct 2009 1:21 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    I think you did a brilliant job with all the extra characters in this story, canon and original ones :)
    I loved what Vera did to wormtail, a good way for such a sneaky little rat to die! she is one cool familiar :D

    Author's Response:

    Yes, she sure is!

    Oh good, because I wasn't sure if I was portraying them correctly, thanks for letting me know.


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