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Title: Dwellers In the Cruicible 11 Oct 2009 12:17 pm
Reviewer: dracosgoddess123 (Signed) [Report This]
    this chapter was ok for me...i miss reading about harry and sev but i understand that this is also a focal point in the story. You portrayed the characters well. The reactions they have suit that situation, especially marietta when she finds out they have dumbledore. Good job! but bring on the harry and sev parts!!! :D

    Author's Response: Thanks very much, I appreciate it.  Read the next chapter I've posted and you'll see lots of Harry and Severus!
Title: Dwellers In the Cruicible 11 Oct 2009 9:04 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Glad wormtail is dead. more of harry and sev, and the kids, please. post soon!

    Author's Response: I have just posted and Harry and Sev are back!
Title: Dwellers In the Cruicible 11 Oct 2009 6:39 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Great chapter! Loved how Wormtail met his maker!!! Served the rat!!! Loved that the snake even hungry wouldn't eat the wretch! Never could stand that character in any form. Love your death of him better than any!!! Keep up the great work!

    Author's Response: Yay! I wanted to give him a really fitting ending, because I can't stand him either. Ugh!
Title: Dwellers In the Cruicible 11 Oct 2009 3:45 am
Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) [Report This]
    Brrr. I think I'd about pee my pants if Bella grinned at me like that! Sorry, too much information. Anyways, I like your portrayal of characters other than Harry and Sev.

    Author's Response:

    Ahh!

    Actualy, I think Bella is scarier than Voldy.  Thanks a lot and hope you like the next part.

Title: Dwellers In the Cruicible 11 Oct 2009 3:39 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my! What clever children. At least they're fighting for their lives.

    You did a good job portraying the children and their fear and bravery.

    Ha ha! Wormtail thought that he was so clever!
    I'm looking forward to seeing more of Snape and Harry.

    Author's Response:

    Yes and they will continue to fight until something happens to them . . .if something happens to them.

    Thanks so much for letting me know that, it relieves my mind.

    He did, but the joke . . .and the snake . . .was on him!


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