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Title: Alerting the Order 09 May 2010 6:00 am
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    I think it's both of them. Remus should definitely fight Greyback and Sirius Bella. I want this story to keep going, I adore it!

    I love how Harry is both a warrior and a kid at the same time and Sybill and Minerva are great also.
Title: Alerting the Order 20 Feb 2010 10:34 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    I just love your story, is all. You can write the tale anyway you wish, s'long as any deaths aren't too sad. Kudos on a well written chapter. Harry's reaction brought to mind Gabrielle from Xena if you've watched the show?
Title: Alerting the Order 16 Feb 2010 9:08 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    I like what I've read so far and I'm sure I'll like whatever you do next, but I would like to see past the final battle please. I could use some bonding. If it's not too much to ask. Otherwise I'll just read your other stories
Title: Alerting the Order 07 Dec 2009 12:46 pm
Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) [Report This]
    I don't think that the first question Harry is asking is too much to ask.
    For the second I think it means both of them.
    Sorry for not reviewing in such a long time I've been trying to not read as often as I was before, but winter break is coming up and I have time. So right now Finals, and the occasional reading :D
    I'm waaay late so no comment on the last few questions on Chapter End Note. Off to bed, then class, then read more :P

    Author's Response: Thanks so much and I know how it is with finals so don't sweat it! I'm just happy you're still reading my story!
Title: Alerting the Order 20 Nov 2009 2:21 am
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter 3000 points to harry for killing the werewolf.

    remus should have a fight with greyback to avenge him for biting him in the first place

    is neville still alive? if so he and sirius should kill bella

    i will read anything that you write so that answers that question

    what has happened to the snake that is meant to be trying to find sev and harry

    Author's Response:

    Harry did do a good thing, but he's kind of in shock still.

    Yes, i agree with that.

    Nev is, but he's not at school, since it's the summer, he's safe at home.

    Thanks!

    Vera is still out there, slowly but surely trying to get to Harry, she's a small snake though so it'll take her a bit to get to him.

Title: Alerting the Order 25 Oct 2009 1:10 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmmm, is it so easy to kill a werewolf? Then why Severus do not kill one after another? Mila

    Author's Response: No, not at all.  And Severus had to reach the forest and couldn't take the time to fight and maybe risk being killed before finding the Horcruxes.
Title: Alerting the Order 23 Oct 2009 6:42 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    In answer to your questions: Both? Yes, REmus and Greyback need ot have it out. Especially as Greyback was the one to turn Remus. Somebody needs to kill Bella. If it would be Sirius , it would have a kind of symmetry about it. And yes, I think that Seve and Harry ought to bond. They are good for each other as well as good to each other. They NEED each other.

    I love it that your Sybil isn't a useless half-wit BTW. Great chapter.

    Author's Response:

    Okay, I think I know what I'm going to do about all of the battles.

    Sev and Harry have always needed each other, they just never wanted to admit it.

    No, Sybil will be playing an important role very soon. Just wait and see.

Title: Alerting the Order 23 Oct 2009 12:56 am
Reviewer: jcmsheltiepup (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I'm really loving this story!!! It's great. Keep up the awesome work!

    To answer your questions:
    1.I think i either applies to Albus or the kids, Sev, Harry and Albus.

    2.I think it's fitting to have Remus fight Greyback & Remus should win.

    3.I think Bella should be killed. I really don't care for Sirius so whatever you do with him is fine by me.

    4.YES!!! I want to see Sev and Harry bond @ Spinner's End.

    Now that I've gave my opinion, I completly trust your judgement on what you do with this story. I know I will love whatever you do.

    jc

    Author's Response:

    Thanks so much and I'm happy you trust me.

    The first question could be all three of them or maybe even four of them.

    You'll be seeing what I do with the battles right now!

Title: Alerting the Order 20 Oct 2009 6:41 pm
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am enjoying the story. Sirius should confront Bella. I do want Severus and Harry to bond, but I would like to see the wolfen again.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much1 I'm finally over my writer's block and I've updated again.  Twice!
Title: Alerting the Order 19 Oct 2009 11:24 pm
Reviewer: kayt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Can't wait for the big battle at Hogwarts. Hope all the werewolves get roasted (not Remus though, unless you really have to kill off one of the good side).
    Part 3 sounds great - there can never be too much of the lovely Sev, and he and Harry deserve a bit of r and r after the Horcrux hunt.

    Author's Response: No, Remus won't die. I never liked it that he died in the books. I agree and that will be coming up after the battle.

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