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Title: Hawks and Phoenixes 23 Oct 2009 10:14 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Woohoo, I loved it1 Go Remus! Greyback got whomped good! And I loved Sev's speech about forgiving those who have returned to the light. Now I can't wait to see what happens with the rest of them! Go Vera!

    Author's Response: Yes Vera is one smart snake and Remus is the same! Severus really knows what he's talking about there and finally Sirius realized it.  I've updated so now you can read and find out!
Title: Hawks and Phoenixes 23 Oct 2009 8:07 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, I loved how Remus outsmarted Greyback! Go Remus!

    And Sirius thanking Vince's father was wonderful. Maybe our favourite dog animagus is finally growing up.

    And Vera made it! Now they just have to get the kids and Dumbledore out of durance vile.

    Wonderful! I really enjoyed reading this and am looking ofrward to the next installment.

    Author's Response:

    Remus's moment was here and now, though he'll still be fighting in the upcoming battle, but this one was his. 

    Yes, Sirius is slowly but surely maturing. A war will do that to you.

    Yes and read the next chapter to see how they do it! I just posted it!

    Thanks for reading!

Title: Hawks and Phoenixes 23 Oct 2009 7:49 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I have really enjoyed reading this saga and cannot wait to see what happens next.

    Author's Response: Thanks and the next chappie's up!
Title: Hawks and Phoenixes 23 Oct 2009 5:23 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh yay Im soo glad that Greyback is dead, what a clever, if not gruesome, end to him! and yay to Vera finding Harry too! :D cant wait to see how they get to the hostages and what they will do to them when they do reach them!

    Author's Response: Yes I was soo happy to kill him off and allow Vera her own time to shine also.  Go and read the next part to find out what happens next!
Title: Hawks and Phoenixes 23 Oct 2009 1:14 pm
Reviewer: SugarQuills (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow! Great chapter! I love how Remus defeated Greyback by outsmarting him. Glad to see that you got over that writer's block :)
    Hmm... I wonder who's gonna come back next chapter? I hope it isn't Voldemort *shivers* But I've got a couple more guesses.
    Update soon! Excellent work like always

    SQ

    Author's Response:

    Yes finally! Thanks to everyone.

    Now you can find out who comes back, because I just posted it.

Title: Hawks and Phoenixes 23 Oct 2009 7:42 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved that Grayback got smashed flat by the willow!!! Served the bugger! Lots of actions, good chapter!

    Author's Response: Yeah it did and I'm so happy he's gone. I love sticking it to the baddies.  And I've updated again!
Title: Hawks and Phoenixes 23 Oct 2009 6:40 am
Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) [Report This]
    HA! Greyback is DEAD! YES! Awesome chapter, I'm so glad. :]
    ~Fern Rose

    Author's Response: He sure  is! And now you can read all about who came back in the next chapter!
Title: Hawks and Phoenixes 23 Oct 2009 6:31 am
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Bravo! That was really cool that you thought about killing Greyback through whomping willow and the coming of Crabbe was really good too. Will look forward to the next chapter!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much.  I wanted to do something different to kill him off and the willow just came to mind.  You'll see Crabbe more as the chapters progress. I've just updated again!

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