For some reason, this reading of the first two paragraphs triggered a memory of being inside the Great Pyramid, with all those tons of stone overhead... The illumination was adequate, but I wish I'd had Severus with me, reassuring me, instead of my no-nonsense mother... Well, I survived, and the Great Pyramid is still standing! Then, another flashback to the lengthy, deep tunnels leading to the tombs in the Valley of the Kings. Poor Harry! I never suffered claustrophobia or fear of the dark, but Egypt could really set someone off! Now, back to the underside of Hogwarts... 🤫
Wow. This is really good, and really tense.
Yes and it was a great one! I loved it! I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. Great job with Nagini and everything! Go Harry!
Wonderful
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
great battle my eyes were flying across the page reading to keep up with the battle scene created in my head :D
Author's Response: Thanks and I'm so glad you liked it. I was afraid it was too much for one chapter.
well lots of points to award
crabbe snr 1000 for killing d.e.
kingsley 1500 for a very well placed blundering curse
carrow 1 pt for killing twin with shredding hex
minerva 1600 bolt killing carrow
molly 700 for a great backhand and 100 points for incarcerus charm
crabbe jnr 400 for shooting d.e.
marietta 300 for slippery hex
sev 1000 for killing d.e. 500 pts for saving hermione 300 for seprasempra 400 for luring nagini
bill 500 for stunning werewolf
sirius 300 blasting hex
harry 2000 for destroying horcrux
bring it on mouldywarts
Author's Response: Yay! Maybe I should post a scoreboard? You could be the score keeper! :D
| Title: The Last Horcrux
| 09 Nov 2009 5:05 am
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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This was so good I felt like I was right there! Kudos! Can't wait for the next part. Go Severus and Harry! Kick Voldy's butt!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
I almost fell out of my chair literally1 This was so intense, loved every minute of it! Now to kill Voldy!
Author's Response: Woohoo! Voldy's going down!
Wow...what a brilliant start to the final battle! it was so well written I cant wait to see old Voldy and Bella get it good lol, and for someone to see to poor old Dumbles too :)
Author's Response: Thanks and Voldy will be getting his and so will Bella. And Sybill would never leave poor Albus that way.
| Title: The Last Horcrux
| 08 Nov 2009 4:43 pm
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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I have really been enjoying this! great battle scene. :) They are definitely hard to write.
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