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Title: " . . .and teach death to die." 10 Nov 2009 3:13 am
Reviewer: Starbuck1332 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Arrrrggghhhh - I hate cliffieeeeesssss. Better now - I can wait - ok I can't. Please Please Please updte soon.

    That was an amazing chapter (better than chocolate)!!!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much! Ooh I rate better than chcoclate??? My God!
Title: " . . .and teach death to die." 09 Nov 2009 9:42 pm
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    WOW! WOW! WOW! What an action-packed well written chapter! When I started it I honestly thought this was the end of the saga of our two heros......you just get better and better!

    Author's Response: No there's lots more to come! Thanks for reading!
Title: " . . .and teach death to die." 09 Nov 2009 9:01 pm
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am so glad you have decided to continue! I am very fond of this story and the characters in it and I am looking forward to the other chapters. (just don't create romance between Snape and Hermione!!)

    Bella in this chapter was a bit out of character though. I mean I am glad she is dead, but the first thing she would have done on seeing Sybill or Dumbledore would be to put an Avada kedavra.

    Author's Response:

    No, that I would never do.  Theirs is a strictly student/teacher relationship. 

    Maybe she would have if she were in her right mind, but she had just been blown through a wall and her head was injured, she had a concussion and wasn't really up to snuff, so that's why she didn't immediately cast a spell.  To me, the Killing Curse isn't something you can just cast immediately, even if you've done it before, it's a powerful piece of magic, and it takes concentration and focus.  Bella didn't have that after smashing through a wall, so she talked a bit, trying to regain her senses, and then the ceiling fell on her.

    Hope you like the next part and thanks for reading!

Title: " . . .and teach death to die." 09 Nov 2009 6:59 pm
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    this was great!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much!

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