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Reviews For Two Hawks Hunting
That was an amazing chapter (better than chocolate)!!! Author's Response: Thanks so much! Ooh I rate better than chcoclate??? My God!
Author's Response: No there's lots more to come! Thanks for reading!
Bella in this chapter was a bit out of character though. I mean I am glad she is dead, but the first thing she would have done on seeing Sybill or Dumbledore would be to put an Avada kedavra. Author's Response: No, that I would never do. Theirs is a strictly student/teacher relationship. Maybe she would have if she were in her right mind, but she had just been blown through a wall and her head was injured, she had a concussion and wasn't really up to snuff, so that's why she didn't immediately cast a spell. To me, the Killing Curse isn't something you can just cast immediately, even if you've done it before, it's a powerful piece of magic, and it takes concentration and focus. Bella didn't have that after smashing through a wall, so she talked a bit, trying to regain her senses, and then the ceiling fell on her. Hope you like the next part and thanks for reading!
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