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Title: Remorse & Reconciliation 07 Jun 2010 10:52 pm
Reviewer: Snapesexfiend (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it as always! I think it's him adopting Harry. It's time for it anyway. I'm glad Severus forgave Albus.
Title: Remorse & Reconciliation 17 Feb 2010 12:00 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    Does Snape adopt Harry? I forgot to put that in my last review.

    Author's Response: Yes, he does as you'll see.
Title: Remorse & Reconciliation 16 Feb 2010 11:58 pm
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh that was good. Hehe Harry got attacked in the loo by invisable sources. I loved the cheek about tying the sheets together. I bet he could get Dumbledore's sheets too if he promised to help the old anti-wizard down. I hope you do come up with a name for Dumbledore, until then I'm calling him the anti-wizard
Title: Remorse & Reconciliation 20 Nov 2009 4:51 am
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    well i'm going to have a guess that sev is going to adopt harry, so harry belongs somewhere or make him a apprentice in potions

    i think sev would make a great headmaster, i know its like following book 7 but that was forced upon him then sev has a cool head in a crisis and he is fair, i would choose him as head.

    bumblebee ridge sounds a nice place for dumbles to recupperate, send molly around with some cookbooks
Title: Remorse & Reconciliation 19 Nov 2009 12:43 am
Reviewer: alifromnm (Signed) [Report This]
    Lovely chapter, full of sadness and laughs. I love how Harry and Severus' relationship has come alone. It's almost like a favorite uncle and nephew or brothers. Important matter??? Wolfens or maybe adoption? Hate to see this story wind down, have loved the series so.
Title: Remorse & Reconciliation 19 Nov 2009 12:05 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww this was so sweet! Snape getting cried all over--hilarious! And so was the bathroom. Great job!

    I'd say Snape wants to adopt Harry.
Title: Remorse & Reconciliation 18 Nov 2009 11:44 pm
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    Adoption?
Title: Remorse & Reconciliation 18 Nov 2009 9:38 pm
Reviewer: dancingkatz (Signed) [Report This]
    Adoption?

    I loved this chapter (and all the preceding ones as well). I think it would be fun to write a story about Albus making hte adjustment to living without magic. The two house elves are going to be driven nuts by him, I'm certain. Bravissimi!
Title: Remorse & Reconciliation 18 Nov 2009 5:25 pm
Reviewer: Poirot (Signed) [Report This]
    I think an adoption is in the future.........and I think the chapter was excellent!
Title: Remorse & Reconciliation 18 Nov 2009 1:41 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Ahh what a lovely chapter. Its so good to see Albus showing some humility and actually crying in front of Sev and Harry to show just how bad he felt, I do hope that he will be able to keep from manipulating people and become a better man and friend to his two favourite boys. I had to laugh with Harry and the bathroom charms! so typical of a Gryffindor to put up a fight from invisible forces that are trying to help :)

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