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Title: The Marauders Help Out 30 Mar 2010 2:26 am
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Very nice chapter! I loved how all the characters have come across as very honest and true. Good job!
Title: The Marauders Help Out 30 Mar 2010 2:03 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Excellent chapter!

    I loved the scene between Remus and Snape. I'd love more of those scenes in the future. Hmmm...maybe Snape and Remus gang up to tease poor Sirius and Harry...

    I also loved the way Harry shock Severus by suddenly calling him Da. It was perfect. Not to mushy and not not to causual. Perfect!

    I'm glad your arm is better(that means more update right ;) )

    Excellent chapter and I can't wait to read the next!

    Author's Response:

    Oh yes, that's a brilliant idea! And it could happen too, when they get more comfortable with each other.  It'd be payback for all the times Siri pranked Sev.

    That's good because I was worried that it was too mushy.

    Yes, it does.

    Thanks so much for reading!


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