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Reviews For Two Hawks Hunting
Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate you reviewing. I always like a Snape who isn't perfect, and not just in regards to his unfairness in viewing Harry. But as a person. He does know a lot but he isn't all knowing.
Author's Response: Yeah, see even my OC have some interesting and tragic backgrounds. Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. The next part will have more of Harry and Sirius.
I couldn't blame Harry for feeling so upset at Severus' behavior. It's sad that Severus was so stressed out that he couldn't sleep and thus, made him irritable and liable to overreact to every little thing. I hope that with the help of the healer Severus will once again be getting enough sleep. Great chapter! Author's Response: yes, you're right. Those who have been there before usually can relate. No, the trust will continue to grow as Severus sees him more often. I felt that he needed a friend. Yeah well everyone has a bad day and Severus did have a point, harry should have told him where he went, especially since he was depressed. Yes, Severus will be getting enough sleep. Thanks so much!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
I also enjoyed the moments between Harry and his new friend. Will he play a larger part in the story? I have a feeling Healer Sandrilas is going to help Sev come to terms with a lot of things. And I can't help but to think of time he and Harry were with Dumbledore and he asked Harry to call him Grandpa, but Snape flat out refused to consider being on more...familial terms. It would be nice if Sandrilas helps Snape reconsider that decision. I'm eagerly awaiting the chaper with McGonagall and Dumbledore terrorizing the muggle neighborhood. Excellent chapter! Author's Response: Oh good, because I wasn't sure if it sounded ridiculous or not. Yes, you'll see more of Paul in future chapters. Sandrilas is a damn good shrink. Yeah, that's true, and maybe if Severus relates that incident, Alec can help him see that Albus is lonely and looking for a family. Yeah that chapter is coming up in a few and should be very funny! |
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