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Title: Healer Sandrilas 02 Apr 2010 3:23 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked the chapter a lot, Healer Sandrilas is a really cool character by the sounds of him, his story was sad but very relevant in gaining Severus' trust seeing as he really does know how it is to fail a child :)
Title: Healer Sandrilas 01 Apr 2010 11:49 pm
Reviewer: kayt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Well up to your usual high standard. It makes a good change that Snape is not totally in control of everything at present - he's actually human!

    Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate you reviewing. I always like a Snape who isn't perfect, and not just in regards to his unfairness in viewing Harry. But as a person. He does know a lot but he isn't all knowing.
Title: Healer Sandrilas 01 Apr 2010 11:30 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    What a sad story the healer told! M.

    Author's Response: Yeah, see even my OC have some interesting and tragic backgrounds. Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Healer Sandrilas 01 Apr 2010 7:55 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Very well done. You never cease to amaze. I look foward to the next chapter. Kudos.

    Author's Response: Thanks so much. The next part will have more of Harry and Sirius.
Title: Healer Sandrilas 01 Apr 2010 12:24 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Those who have been there will usually understand the best, so in this case Healer Sandrilas is the perfect person for Severus to talk to. I hope that the trust that has begun to bloom won't wither and die at any point.

    I couldn't blame Harry for feeling so upset at Severus' behavior. It's sad that Severus was so stressed out that he couldn't sleep and thus, made him irritable and liable to overreact to every little thing. I hope that with the help of the healer Severus will once again be getting enough sleep.

    Great chapter!

    Author's Response:

    yes, you're right. Those who have been there before usually can relate. No, the trust will continue to grow as Severus sees him more often. I felt that he needed a friend.

    Yeah well everyone has a bad day and Severus did have a point, harry should have told him where he went, especially since he was depressed.  Yes, Severus will be getting enough sleep.

    Thanks so much!

Title: Healer Sandrilas 01 Apr 2010 7:31 am
Reviewer: DS (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Amazing!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much!
Title: Healer Sandrilas 01 Apr 2010 7:26 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Oddly enough, I loved the fight between Harry and Sev. It was perfectly done!

    I also enjoyed the moments between Harry and his new friend. Will he play a larger part in the story?

    I have a feeling Healer Sandrilas is going to help Sev come to terms with a lot of things. And I can't help but to think of time he and Harry were with Dumbledore and he asked Harry to call him Grandpa, but Snape flat out refused to consider being on more...familial terms. It would be nice if Sandrilas helps Snape reconsider that decision.

    I'm eagerly awaiting the chaper with McGonagall and Dumbledore terrorizing the muggle neighborhood.

    Excellent chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Oh good, because I wasn't sure if it sounded ridiculous or not.

    Yes, you'll see more of Paul in future chapters.

    Sandrilas is a damn good shrink. Yeah, that's true, and maybe if Severus relates that incident, Alec can help him see that Albus is lonely and looking for a family.

    Yeah that chapter is coming up in a few and should be very funny!


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