| Title: To Conquer the Dark
| 19 Apr 2010 5:37 am
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| Reviewer: Judy (Signed)
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Another wonderful chapter. You have a great way of making me feel everything a character feels. Harry deserves to have both a Muggle and wizard friend. Good job!
I think the whole chapter was wonderful. Can't wait to see what happens next and when Paul meets Harry's other friends. I'm glad Severus is teaching Paul how to box too.
that chapter was really good and paul having lessons in defending himself is really good, i hope he likes them, the way harry is dealing with his phobia is great, keep up the good work
Bullies! I hope Paul beats them next time! M.
| Title: To Conquer the Dark
| 16 Apr 2010 7:53 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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What a great chapter, I hope harry and paul kick some a.. the next time the bullies show up. I love the story.
I'm glad that Harry has made a strong commitment to defeating his fears. It will be a long hard war and he will lose some battles, but if he preseveres he will succeed in the end.
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