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Title: In A Tight Spot 13 Jun 2010 6:01 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    Major is awesome, he'll fit right in.
Title: In A Tight Spot 19 Apr 2010 5:47 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    yes have Paul go that would be so funny! I loved how Major adopted Severus. It was classic!
Title: In A Tight Spot 19 Apr 2010 5:19 am
Reviewer: Tutti Frutti (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter!!!! I love your writing!!! And yes, Paul should go on vacation with them to that place with a weird name. And while on that vacation something should happen to Snape...again. lol As you can tell I have a massive obsession with Snape and things happening to him. Keep writing!!!
Title: In A Tight Spot 19 Apr 2010 3:22 am
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Major is so awesome! They had better keep him. He reminds me of my own kitty who has run away and been missing for a few days now.

    Take Paul with them! It should be a hoot!
Title: In A Tight Spot 18 Apr 2010 3:04 pm
Reviewer: kreacher (Signed) [Report This]
    that was great, really liked it, the animal shelter sounds like a nice place to work, i just adore cats, major is a cat who knows what he wants and is friendly when he wants, not when other people want.
    the bullies got what for aswell, pity harry and paul fell down a hole, but sev managed to find them safe and well
Title: In A Tight Spot 17 Apr 2010 2:34 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    yes reviewing again....it's good to see Harry getting to act like a teenager. I like Paul and Major. I am so looking forward to the next update and I hope those bullies get what's coming to them.
Title: In A Tight Spot 17 Apr 2010 12:03 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    *looks sheepish*

    I was so excited about the Albus/Minerva chapter I forgot to answer your question.

    I don't really know about Paul coming alone. I suppose it could prove interesting especially with Harry calling him Grandpa...hmmmm in order to keep their cover Snape would probably have to refere to him as 'Dad' right? lol. I'm all for it.

    Oh! And I love Major. He's perfect for Severus.
Title: In A Tight Spot 16 Apr 2010 11:59 pm
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Yay!!! Minerva and Albus chapter coming up! I'm very excited!

    Excellent chapter. I suppose Harry is pretty much over his fear of the dark now? Then again I'm in the mood for a mushy Sev and Harry moment so if you wanted to give him one really bad nightmare that Sev has to comfort him for I wouldn't object. ;)

    Anyway, I'm now officially hooked on this story and I can't wait to read more!
Title: In A Tight Spot 16 Apr 2010 11:02 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww Major is so cute! definatly the cat for Severus. A holiday in Skegness sounds totally cool and something Albus will love, I used to love going there as a kid lol, I dont mind either way if Paul was to go with them :)
Title: In A Tight Spot 16 Apr 2010 8:54 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm really glad that Harry and Paul are okay. So many things could have gone wrong. It's good that they were able to find ways to keep each other calm in their situation.

    I wonder how long it will take for Severus to figure out that Major chose him, not Harry? Harry started all of this by getting Major to come out of his shell and trust a bit again, but he is too young for a cat like Major. Of course, Major does likes Harry, but I agree that Severus is a better match for him. They need each other and I think that Major will make Severus an excellent familiar.

    Something does need to be down about those boys. One thing is clear; the animal shelter needs to make sure that they don't ever adopt any animal from them. Bart and his cohorts' behavoirs were atrocious and their bad intentions obvious.

    Great chapter! As to your question, I think it would be a good idea to have Paul go with them. It will give Harry someone his own age to play with and will keep Paul out of the reach of that gang of bullies.

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