I love this. I think the depiction of Albus is correct to a t! Great series!
Title: A Memorable Vacation
| 20 Apr 2010 1:06 am
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Reviewer: Tutti Frutti (Anonymous)
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Happy belated birthday!!!! Great chapter once again!!!!! Loves your writing and this a lot!!! *gives cookie* As you can tell I like exclamation marks so please forgive me for being hyper all the time. lol Keep writing awesomeness!!!
Happy Birthday and thanks for the chuckles! What a fun chapter!
Title: A Memorable Vacation
| 19 Apr 2010 11:15 pm
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Reviewer: kayt (Anonymous)
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So glad Major selected Severus as his wizard. How long before he gets the odd tin of tuna, or even fresh fish? You captured the flavour of a seaside holiday really well and even Severus managed to let his hair down a little. As for Albus, if he has to live like a muggle he may as well enjoy it. And let us enjoy it too! Great chapter, and Happy Birthday, probably for yesterday now.
Title: A Memorable Vacation
| 19 Apr 2010 10:34 pm
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Reviewer: Peg (Anonymous)
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Happy Birthday!
Love the chapter! Any chapter with a magic-less Albus in it always makes me crack up! :D There's never a dull moment when you have Albus with you, ain't that right? The ending with Severus and Albus was also very heartwarming :) Keep up the brilliant work!
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Happy birthday!!
Awesome chapter! I love the relationship betewen those three. Can't wait to see what else Albus and the boys get into. Thanks for a great beginning to my week.
Happy Birthday! And thanks for this yet again excellent chapter ^_^
Oh wow loved this chapter! it had me laughing several times throughout their adventures, it made a good birthday present for me too lol (the 18th) I was out all day so am reading it today :D cant wait for more adventures :)
I wanted to make sure I reviewed at both places. Happy B'day girl. Hope it was everything you wanted. Again, OMG! I have loved these stories, but this chapter is just the icing on the cake. Thank you for the laughs. Yellow smiley face surfer shorts, love it. Everyone should have a grandfather like this!!
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