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Reviews For Two Hawks Hunting
Wonderful chapter as always. I was laughing all the way through it. Looking forward to the next chapter and what Albus and the boys are going to get into. Again Hope you have a awsome birthday!!
This chapter is as well written as each chapter before it. You are a very talented writer. Good luck on further projects. Your characters are well written and the reader will feel very close to them. Good job.
Albus certainly is a hoot, isn't he? They will certainly never be bored hanging out with him! I think that this experience was a good one and will make this family far stronger. I think that Severus has accepted Albus as his father of the heart at long last. I have a feeling that there is a great deal of matchmaking in Severus' future. It is time for him to move on with his life and allow romantic love back into it. I wonder if he will ever realize that he is actually an attractive man and not at all repulsive? He seems to be under the impression that his scars make him ugly, but the responses of others implies otherwise. How will his re-introduction to Thea go? Is there a chance for a relationship between them to grow again? Great chapter!
I loved this chapter! It was well worth the wait. I'm thrilled Sev is calling Albus 'dad'. You wrote that beautifully! I laughed through most of this chapter at the Sev and Albus interaction. And at Albus's clothing. Again, this chapter was better then I imagined and hope the next one is similiar. Or at least there will be a few more Albus/Severus moments. I'm going to read it again, now. Thanks for an amazing chapter!
The scene with the phone and everything else had me cracking up laughing. Dumbledore with a credit card scared me. Bad. |
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