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Title: Past Regrets 13 Jun 2010 7:19 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    I think that's my favorite chapter since I picked your story back up, and I sat it down about the time Moon Fire really distracted me. I'm terribly afraid you'll have Thea overly upset with him, but I'm sure once he explains to her... If Kyle dumped me because he had to go back to being a spy, i'd be pissed but I'd take him back.
Title: Past Regrets 03 May 2010 11:49 pm
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved it! I want them to get back together please! They so deserve each other. I loved the end with Minerva fighting mice with Major, too cute!
Title: Past Regrets 03 May 2010 11:10 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww poor Sev. He always sacrifices his own happiness for duty and honor. It's about time someone told him to stop it and he can find love again. I hate that he's always alone.

    Maybe he can start up a new relationship soon with Thea?
Title: Past Regrets 26 Apr 2010 7:35 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    I'd say a book or something from Hermione. Not sure about the rest. Btw, Kudos on a job well done. Nice chapter.
Title: Past Regrets 23 Apr 2010 2:32 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Aww poor Severus, he has had to give up so much for the war to atone for his one mistake, it was good to see the history with Thea though :)
Title: Past Regrets 23 Apr 2010 1:24 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked this chapter, though after the last not much can compete. Did I mention you're an amazing writer?

    As for presents:
    Video Games
    Movies (Maybe from Hermione. That could make it more interesting)
    Books (Magical mystery novels?)
    A magical way to communicate with Meadowsweet. (Like the mirror or something similiar)

    Thats all I can think of hope someone else gives you better ideas.

    Awesome chapter!
Title: Past Regrets 22 Apr 2010 10:50 pm
Reviewer: MilkaZen (Signed) [Report This]
    Thank you for this chapter, it should help me to better understand when Thea is there ^_^

    For the presents : some books, some sweets, some things people made themselves (like meadowsweet)... I hope it helps a little ^_^ Whatever you chose, i'm sure it will be good ;-)
Title: Past Regrets 22 Apr 2010 9:59 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I wish that Severus could have told Thea so much more or could have perhaps asked her to come with him. He shouldn't have had to give up love to remain free. It's sad that he was trapped by the circumstances of his past. I hope that Thea will give him another chance when they meet again.

    Great chapter! As to the gifts request: Hermione would probaby get him something practical; Ron and Ginny, candy of some sort; Paul, something that they both would appreciate (like a new game?), Meadowsweet, probably something hand-made by her. I'm not sure on the others.

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