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Title: Privet Drive, Once More 13 Jun 2010 9:00 am
Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) [Report This]
    Hmm, Severus seemed vary familiar when he was telling Harry to leave the door open; oh yeah, he sounded like my ex's mum!
    I loved the wizard variation of the dragon quote. I've heard the dragon quote many ways but I like it, "Meddle not in the affairs of dragons for thou art crunchy and good with ketchup."
Title: Privet Drive, Once More 04 May 2010 12:14 am
Reviewer: Judy (Signed) [Report This]
    This whole chapter was great! I loved how the Dursleys were handled and everything. Severus was awesome and so was Harry.

    Bravo!! Such a great chapter!
Title: Privet Drive, Once More 03 May 2010 11:38 pm
Reviewer: DrSnape (Signed) [Report This]
    Yes, it's about time they got what they deserved. I think that maybe one day they'll learn their lesson and be free of the curse. At least I hope so!

    I loved the part with Harry and Sasha and Severus going all watchful-dad on them. Too funny! I love Ladyhawke too! Such a great movie!
Title: Privet Drive, Once More 02 May 2010 12:58 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Ah loved that telling off! they both really needed to get it said. It made me laugh when Severus told the two teens to keep the door open, so very parental :)
Title: Privet Drive, Once More 02 May 2010 5:40 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    It's rather unfortunate that the Dursleys are so very thick...at least for them. You would think that after so long that they would have at least begun to get the point. Do they truly think that an innocent child deserved that kind of treatment? That how they were acting was in anyway morally sound?

    I feel that Petunia was the worst of the lot. As Harry said, every time she did something hurtful to Harry or allowed someone else to, she was betraying her sister, who would never have done such things to Dudley. Lily would have loved Dudley as her own.

    Great chapter!
Title: Privet Drive, Once More 01 May 2010 11:48 pm
Reviewer: kayt (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Harry's never going to keep his mind on his schoolwork back at Hogwarts with Meadowsweet close by!
    I thought Harry might have shown a bit of compassion and asked Severus to cancel the curse on the Dursleys seeing as he'll never be going back there. I'm always a bit uncomfortable with permanent magical punishment being used on them, no matter how awful they are. Suppose it depends on whether you look at things from the "an eye for an eye...", or "two wrongs don't make a right" point of view.
    Anyway, it's still a great story and I'm glad there's more to come.
Title: Privet Drive, Once More 01 May 2010 8:12 pm
Reviewer: Rhyselle (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh, wow! This has been fantastic read! And I'm thrilled the there's more to come!

    I've truly loved this rollercoaster ride, and want to thank you for the chills, thrill, tears and laughter it elicited from me as I absorbed each chapter of the story so far.

    I have to admit that the image that is going to stay in my mind for quite some time is our dear magicless Dumbledore on a surfboard! That was just absolutely hysterical!

    Your characterization was wonderful, I loved meeting Jace Witherspoon's family, and Vince Crabbe's too. The bad guys were believably scary, and I thought your ideas on the destruction of the horcruxes were much more exciting and heartrending than the ones in canon! I envy you your imagination! :) In a good way, of course!

    Looking forward to upcoming chapters! Well done!
Title: Privet Drive, Once More 01 May 2010 8:07 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Intense. Very intense. I think I have seen Ladyhawke, but for some reason I can't remember it very well. I know Princess Bride though. Watched that enough times that I'm starting to memorize my lines. *snicker* Avon calling. Kudos on a wonderful chapter.

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