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Reviews For Two Hawks Hunting
I loved the wizard variation of the dragon quote. I've heard the dragon quote many ways but I like it, "Meddle not in the affairs of dragons for thou art crunchy and good with ketchup."
Bravo!! Such a great chapter!
I loved the part with Harry and Sasha and Severus going all watchful-dad on them. Too funny! I love Ladyhawke too! Such a great movie!
I feel that Petunia was the worst of the lot. As Harry said, every time she did something hurtful to Harry or allowed someone else to, she was betraying her sister, who would never have done such things to Dudley. Lily would have loved Dudley as her own. Great chapter!
I thought Harry might have shown a bit of compassion and asked Severus to cancel the curse on the Dursleys seeing as he'll never be going back there. I'm always a bit uncomfortable with permanent magical punishment being used on them, no matter how awful they are. Suppose it depends on whether you look at things from the "an eye for an eye...", or "two wrongs don't make a right" point of view. Anyway, it's still a great story and I'm glad there's more to come.
I've truly loved this rollercoaster ride, and want to thank you for the chills, thrill, tears and laughter it elicited from me as I absorbed each chapter of the story so far. I have to admit that the image that is going to stay in my mind for quite some time is our dear magicless Dumbledore on a surfboard! That was just absolutely hysterical! Your characterization was wonderful, I loved meeting Jace Witherspoon's family, and Vince Crabbe's too. The bad guys were believably scary, and I thought your ideas on the destruction of the horcruxes were much more exciting and heartrending than the ones in canon! I envy you your imagination! :) In a good way, of course! Looking forward to upcoming chapters! Well done!
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