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Title: Chapter 6 – Separated Ways 18 Oct 2009 4:02 pm
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad Draco feels a little more comfortable around Black Hawk. You wrote that scene very well and I could really understand Draco's unease.

    Wonderful Chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 6 – Separated Ways 14 Jul 2009 1:28 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Using curds to heal a sunburn is a very original concept. I wouldn't worry about using it in your story, after all, we are learning about another culture, so it's okay for it to be different.

    I think that taking care and bonding with an animal is very therapeutic. What a wonderful opportunity for the boys to learn to trust, even if it isn't with a human at first.

    I'm continuing to be impressed with the originality of this story. ;)

    Author's Response:

    For me it was so normal to write the part with the curd and I was a little shocked that you can't buy it so easily in the US. What are you baking with?

    I always was interested in animal therapy. For abused kids it is easier to trust an animal than a human.

    I'm glad I can impress you with my story. 

    Thanks for all your wonderful reviews!

Title: Chapter 6 – Separated Ways 14 Jul 2009 12:04 am
Reviewer: hawkswench (Anonymous) [Report This]
    One thing that we use here in my family as a home cure for sunburn is apple cider vinegar. Soak a towel or wash cloths with it and lay it on the person. Of course you do go around smelling like vinegar.

    Author's Response: My beta told me about Aloe vera. It's also used for sunburns. It's interesting how many differnet cures we have.
Title: Chapter 6 – Separated Ways 13 Jul 2009 8:30 pm
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed) [Report This]
    Just as I submitted my review for this chapter on ff.net, I found out that you've finally updated the story here, too.

    This was a lovely chapter. Glad that Draco found the courage to overcome his fears, to some degree at least. Little changes can spark bigger things, so I hope that Draco's on the right path to live to the fullest again. And Harry... he's pretty messed up, what with all the revenge, huh? And, yeah, physical exercise, even if it is just wood-chopping, can be a great release for any kind of frustration. Very realistic, that.

    Author's Response: Thanks for posting a review here as well. Yes, Harry is very messed up. You will find out more soon.

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