| Title: Chapter 16 - Tohiadedi
| 14 Jan 2011 8:38 pm
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| Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed)
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awww wow you write the slow process of healing so well
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it!
Great chapter. I'd love to see some more interaction between Harry, DRaco, and Sev.
Excellent chapter, please update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
| Title: Chapter 16 - Tohiadedi
| 28 Dec 2009 4:26 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Great job! I am really enjoying this story and am glad to see the updates!
Keep up the good work.
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I just realised how unhappy I would be in the camp. I hate heat, I hate dust, I hate smelly people, and honestly, I would find horses boring. Anyway, I hope Harry will be happy there. The way he was persuading the horse was great :) Mila PS Happy New Year 2010!
Author's Response: I would love to have a time-out there, but I can see your point of view as well. :) Thank you very much for your review! Happy New Year to you as well!
| Title: Chapter 16 - Tohiadedi
| 27 Dec 2009 4:02 pm
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| Reviewer: Pandora (Signed)
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Aw, I'm glad that you've updated. I'm happy for Harry that his horse finally cooperated; now Harry won't feel different than the others, and he'll be able to go riding with Draco.
I just hope that Severus' problems can be solved as easily.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
I finally got around to starting this story and now I'm on emotional overload. Not that I'm complaining, mind you. It's going to be a long hard road for our trio of heroes, but I think that it is the very fact that it is hard that will ensure that they will heal. Wonderfully done!
Oh, one note. On quite a few occasions the word loose was substituted for lose. It's a very common mistake. Loose means that something isn't tight. Lose means fail to keep.
Author's Response: Oh, I will check for the losse/lose mistakes. Thanks for telling me! As for the emotional overload, it will become better after a few more chapters. :) Thank you very much for your review!
| Title: Chapter 16 - Tohiadedi
| 27 Dec 2009 8:11 am
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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Great chapter, just goes to show how great animsls are with helping people, like was said in the chapter, they are great to talk to. Have a great holiday.
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nice update. i am enjoying this story
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