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Title: Chapter 30 - Maya 12 May 2010 2:14 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Cool chapter :) it was good to see Draco start to have some trust in Light Arrow :)

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 30 - Maya 12 May 2010 9:36 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I don't blame Harry for having dark thoughts about the Death Eaters, not after what they did to him and his friends. I would be more worried if he didn't have them. It's only natural that he wants revenge.

    Some might forgive Maya for her attitude earlier, but I don't. As she said, she knows that at this stage that they wouldn't understand why it's so important. To me, it makes her behavoir even worse, because she knows that she was just like them at one point and should have realized that they were going to need her guidance. I'm sure that she was also lead by someone more experienced when collecting stones for her first sweat lodge. So..sorry...no forgiveness from me.

    I hope that no one will chastize either boy for Draco's sunstroke. It's clear that he was already beginning to get it even before they started messing around with the wheelbarrel. Neither of the boys has the experience to recognise the signs, so I cannot blame them. If Maya had been doing what she was asked and keeping an eye on the boys, she would have actually caught it before Draco got to the point of getting sick. But instead she chose to focus solely upon herself. Ultimately, though, I blame Light Arrow for making the foolish decision to send them with Maya. He should have sent the boys with someone else to begin with; someone who wasn't concerned about their own sweatlodge.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! Your reviews are always so detailed and have depth. Every time I upload, I'm lokking forward to them. Thank you very very much. That means a lot to me!!!

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