| Title: Chapter 37 – Preparing for the Sweat Lodge
| 24 Jun 2010 7:09 am
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| Reviewer: lotrluver (Signed)
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Once again I love your stories and hope you will never stop sharing them. I'm really sorry I don't review every chapter, but my computer likes to lock up when I try to review. Just know that I always review in spirit if I am unable to get through. I also specifically wanted you to know that I love the representation of the Native American culture in your story. Keep up the great work. See you next chapter.
Author's Response: It's so good to hear words like that! Thank you very much for your review!
| Title: Chapter 37 – Preparing for the Sweat Lodge
| 24 Jun 2010 2:43 am
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| Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed)
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Ooh on to the sweat lodge, cool :D it'll be interesting to see how the boys react to thier 1st one :)
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this chapter was great. its good to see draco connecting with red horse. i love this story because its so interesting how they live and thier ceremonies. fantasitc work. and please dont stop posting on here wouldnt know what to do if i couldnt read it lol :)
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I liked knowing more about Red Horse, he seems like a really sweet character :) the wrestling between Severus and Black Hawk made me laugh, its good to see them behaving like brothers having fun and getting scolded by their elders for wrestling lol :)
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It must be hard for Red Horse when some of the children are scared of him simply because of his size. It also doesn't help that he is a bit shy and avoids spending time around them. If he began to join in more, he would find that the children would quickly pick up on his gentle nature and his confidence will grow.
Severus was resentful in the beginning because he suddenly realized that he was tricked into coming. He doesn't like to admit that he has weakness of any kind and to have it exposed to his children embarrassed and upset him. He is beginning to calm down a bit now and allowing himself to relax.
Author's Response: Ypu are totally right about Red Horse! Thank you very much for your review! The next chapter will be up in a few hours!
What the boys did really wasn't all that bad. They are teenagers and it's a really normal and healthy, if foolish, thing for them to do. Besides, it's not like the girls were nude. I would be shocked if similar scenes hadn't happened with girls being the culprits at some point. xD
I'm not sure how Draco would respond to the offer to be trained in wrestling. I guess it will partially depend on HOW it was presented to him. One on one training would terrify him, but in a group he might be fine. I really think that Harry would appreciate having someone who doesn't expect him to open up or talk.
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Loved the last 4 chapters, ive been away for 2 weeks and it was lovely to come back to see chapters waiting for me :) this is still one of my favourite stories and I cant wait to see where Light Arrow is taking Severus and what will happen there! :)
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I feel so bad for Severus and Harry.
I'm sorry that people are giving you a hard time Sunny. Just ignore those people and continue to write for yourself. I agree; writing is very therapeutic.
I loved this chapter, but since I'm a vegetarian, I skipped over the part where they are describing how they kill animals with their spears.
I really hope that some progress is made in their therapies soon. I want so much for Severus, Draco and Harry to heal and perhaps to become a family one day.
And I hope that you too are healing Sunny. Everyone deserves peace and happiness, and I'm glad that writing is so therapeutic for you. That is the way that it SHOULD be.
Author's Response: Thanks for your kind words! I will promise to give you a warning before I write about the hunting! I can even put a warning begin and end in the text for you, so you can skip the part! Thank you very much for your review!
| Title: Chapter 34 – Supper
| 05 Jun 2010 6:40 pm
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| Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous)
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Really enjoyed this chaptr, showed how hard it is to heal. Lovd the dialogue between the group!
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I saw this reaction from Severus coming; I know that it's really hard for him to feel out of the loop, especially when it comes to his boys. I know that they want Severus to work on his own issues first, but that is a nearly impossible request to make of him. I just hope that some good will come of this mess.
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