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Title: Chapter 32 - Frustration 24 May 2010 11:06 pm
Reviewer: FaeChild (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Oh I cant wait for the next chapter. I cant wait to see how Light Arrow handles this situation. And its great to see Draco healing a little each time. I hope Harry makes a bit of progress too sometime :) Well done ~FaeChild

    Author's Response: The next chapters will almost be completely about Harry's problems and his progress in the healing. Then it will be Draco who needs a bit more attention again. Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 31 – Opening Up 17 May 2010 11:13 am
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Loved the scene with Draco and Light Arrow, it was good to see Albus in this chapter too for a bit :) keep em coming :P

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 31 – Opening Up 17 May 2010 5:16 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    It will be hard on all of them, no matter which way you look at it. I'm not sure that any of them are ready for the events over the next few days. I have a feeling that there will be too many people in the sweatlodge for both Harry and Draco. It's unrealistic to expect them to be able to handle being surrounded by that many men in such small quarters. The other thing that worries me is the heat; if Draco can't handle the heat from the walk...how can he handle the heat in the sweatlodge?

    Author's Response: Light Arrow is very experienced. He knows what he has to do to make the sweat lodge happen with both boys. Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 31 – Opening Up 17 May 2010 12:33 am
Reviewer: JLAJ (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I am always so excited to see a new chapter in this story pop up because I know it will be an excellent read. This chapter was no exception. Wonderful interaction between Draco and Light Arrow! Please keep up the great work, and thank you so much for writing!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 30 - Maya 12 May 2010 2:14 pm
Reviewer: crazychick84 (Signed) [Report This]
    Cool chapter :) it was good to see Draco start to have some trust in Light Arrow :)

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 30 - Maya 12 May 2010 9:36 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I don't blame Harry for having dark thoughts about the Death Eaters, not after what they did to him and his friends. I would be more worried if he didn't have them. It's only natural that he wants revenge.

    Some might forgive Maya for her attitude earlier, but I don't. As she said, she knows that at this stage that they wouldn't understand why it's so important. To me, it makes her behavoir even worse, because she knows that she was just like them at one point and should have realized that they were going to need her guidance. I'm sure that she was also lead by someone more experienced when collecting stones for her first sweat lodge. So..sorry...no forgiveness from me.

    I hope that no one will chastize either boy for Draco's sunstroke. It's clear that he was already beginning to get it even before they started messing around with the wheelbarrel. Neither of the boys has the experience to recognise the signs, so I cannot blame them. If Maya had been doing what she was asked and keeping an eye on the boys, she would have actually caught it before Draco got to the point of getting sick. But instead she chose to focus solely upon herself. Ultimately, though, I blame Light Arrow for making the foolish decision to send them with Maya. He should have sent the boys with someone else to begin with; someone who wasn't concerned about their own sweatlodge.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! Your reviews are always so detailed and have depth. Every time I upload, I'm lokking forward to them. Thank you very very much. That means a lot to me!!!
Title: Chapter 29 - Inseparable 06 May 2010 8:40 pm
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    That was a nice light chapter. I really do enjoy this story and I can't wait for the next chapter. I'm sorry you're have so many problems with your beta's. However daily life does tend to get in the way sometimes for everyone and while you may be able to write the chapters quickly they may not be able to edit them as fast as you write. Please don't stop posting this story.

    Author's Response:

    It's more about me being worried that their is really something wrong with this story. All my betas became ill or someone close to them became ill. That is really weird. I'm starting to become paranoid now. :( It also is a bit odd for me to write on a chapter which plot is so much ahead from what I have posted. I currently write on chapter 47.

    One actual beta is back on work now and so I can post a new chapter soon!

    Thank you very much for your review! 

     

     

Title: Chapter 29 - Inseparable 06 May 2010 3:48 pm
Reviewer: dracosgoddess123 (Signed) [Report This]
    i think ive said in other reviews but i really love this story. im always looking at my inbox to see if there is an alert for a new chapter :D i really liked in this chapter how you showed aidan and brian. it just reminds me that there are others at the camp.

    i hope your beta troubles sort themselves out, i would really hate to have to wait so long between updates but as long as you dont abandon this story then i will be happy. long waits just mean that i have to re-read the whole story to remember what has happened which i have no problem doing :D

    great job on this chaper 10/10

    Author's Response:

    Yes, I didn't gave much info about the other kids and people in the camp because I didn't want to confuse my readers. Now it is time that you all will learn more about the other members of the camp.

    My current beta is working and I hope I think I can upload a new chapter soon.

     Thank you very much for your review!

Title: Chapter 29 - Inseparable 06 May 2010 11:24 am
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    Maya needs an attitude adjustment. Harry and Draco's reaction to her nastiness was perfectly understandable. Light Arrow was wrong to force them to go with her. She will not be helpful to the boys with that kind of attitude. That she has more experience is irrelevant when her selfish behavior will only make them feel bad.

    Author's Response: You will get to know Maya and her reasons to be so bitchy soon! Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 29 - Inseparable 06 May 2010 11:00 am
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    I forgot - it would be great if you published the unbeated chapter on your pages. Mila

    Author's Response: It won't be necessary. I'm very addicted to get reviews. That why I'm posting to be honest. I need feedback to go on. On my homepage I don't get much feedback. :( My current beta is working on the chapters and I think I will be able to upload soon.

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