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Reviews For Cherokee Camp
Author's Response: The next chapters will almost be completely about Harry's problems and his progress in the healing. Then it will be Draco who needs a bit more attention again. Thank you very much for your review!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Author's Response: Light Arrow is very experienced. He knows what he has to do to make the sweat lodge happen with both boys. Thank you very much for your review!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Some might forgive Maya for her attitude earlier, but I don't. As she said, she knows that at this stage that they wouldn't understand why it's so important. To me, it makes her behavoir even worse, because she knows that she was just like them at one point and should have realized that they were going to need her guidance. I'm sure that she was also lead by someone more experienced when collecting stones for her first sweat lodge. So..sorry...no forgiveness from me. I hope that no one will chastize either boy for Draco's sunstroke. It's clear that he was already beginning to get it even before they started messing around with the wheelbarrel. Neither of the boys has the experience to recognise the signs, so I cannot blame them. If Maya had been doing what she was asked and keeping an eye on the boys, she would have actually caught it before Draco got to the point of getting sick. But instead she chose to focus solely upon herself. Ultimately, though, I blame Light Arrow for making the foolish decision to send them with Maya. He should have sent the boys with someone else to begin with; someone who wasn't concerned about their own sweatlodge. Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! Your reviews are always so detailed and have depth. Every time I upload, I'm lokking forward to them. Thank you very very much. That means a lot to me!!!
Author's Response: It's more about me being worried that their is really something wrong with this story. All my betas became ill or someone close to them became ill. That is really weird. I'm starting to become paranoid now. :( It also is a bit odd for me to write on a chapter which plot is so much ahead from what I have posted. I currently write on chapter 47. One actual beta is back on work now and so I can post a new chapter soon! Thank you very much for your review!
i hope your beta troubles sort themselves out, i would really hate to have to wait so long between updates but as long as you dont abandon this story then i will be happy. long waits just mean that i have to re-read the whole story to remember what has happened which i have no problem doing :D great job on this chaper 10/10 Author's Response: Yes, I didn't gave much info about the other kids and people in the camp because I didn't want to confuse my readers. Now it is time that you all will learn more about the other members of the camp. My current beta is working and I hope I think I can upload a new chapter soon. Thank you very much for your review!
Author's Response: You will get to know Maya and her reasons to be so bitchy soon! Thank you very much for your review!
Author's Response: It won't be necessary. I'm very addicted to get reviews. That why I'm posting to be honest. I need feedback to go on. On my homepage I don't get much feedback. :( My current beta is working on the chapters and I think I will be able to upload soon. |
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