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Title: Chapter 16 - Tohiadedi 28 Dec 2009 4:26 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great job! I am really enjoying this story and am glad to see the updates!

    Keep up the good work.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 16 - Tohiadedi 27 Dec 2009 4:11 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    I just realised how unhappy I would be in the camp. I hate heat, I hate dust, I hate smelly people, and honestly, I would find horses boring. Anyway, I hope Harry will be happy there. The way he was persuading the horse was great :) Mila PS Happy New Year 2010!

    Author's Response: I would love to have a time-out there, but I can see your point of view as well. :) Thank you very much for your review! Happy New Year to you as well!
Title: Chapter 16 - Tohiadedi 27 Dec 2009 4:02 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, I'm glad that you've updated. I'm happy for Harry that his horse finally cooperated; now Harry won't feel different than the others, and he'll be able to go riding with Draco.

    I just hope that Severus' problems can be solved as easily.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 16 - Tohiadedi 27 Dec 2009 2:34 pm
Reviewer: silverstargirl (Signed) [Report This]
    I finally got around to starting this story and now I'm on emotional overload. Not that I'm complaining, mind you. It's going to be a long hard road for our trio of heroes, but I think that it is the very fact that it is hard that will ensure that they will heal. Wonderfully done!

    Oh, one note. On quite a few occasions the word loose was substituted for lose. It's a very common mistake. Loose means that something isn't tight. Lose means fail to keep.

    Author's Response: Oh, I will check for the losse/lose mistakes. Thanks for telling me! As for the emotional overload, it will become better after a few more chapters. :) Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 16 - Tohiadedi 27 Dec 2009 8:11 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter, just goes to show how great animsls are with helping people, like was said in the chapter, they are great to talk to. Have a great holiday.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 16 - Tohiadedi 27 Dec 2009 6:43 am
Reviewer: DazzlingD (Signed) [Report This]
    nice update. i am enjoying this story

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 15 - How to Fight 03 Dec 2009 6:29 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Sev! I am looking forward the horses - been a long time! I wonder how your problems with the beta-reader worked out? Has your "old" one more time or you found a new one? Mila

    Author's Response:

    It's still the old one and I HOPE she has more time now. We will see. A preview for the next chapter is on my homepage now!

    Thank you very much for your review!

Title: Chapter 15 - How to Fight 03 Dec 2009 7:39 am
Reviewer: missny1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Great chapter, it just goes to show that sev is human and hurting. Would love more of harry and draco. post soon!

    Author's Response: The coming chapter will be more about Draco and Harry. Thank you very much for your review! A sneak preview of the next chapter is on my homepage!
Title: Chapter 15 - How to Fight 03 Dec 2009 2:49 am
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed) [Report This]
    As long as you're feeling better, the updates can come when they can. You're much more important, no matter how much we all love this story!

    Author's Response: Your are really kind!!! Thank you very much for your review! A sneak preview of the next chapter is on my homepage!
Title: Chapter 15 - How to Fight 01 Dec 2009 11:57 pm
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    Great update. :) I was wondering what happened next, and it was sad to see that Severus is having some problems, but some how it makes sense. He's under a lot of stress and pain, from himself and from his boys. He seemed distant in previous chapters in some way, and now it is apparent why. I hope that he can be an example to the others, even though he is reluctant. Thank you for the chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! A sneak preview of the next chapter is on my homepage!

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