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Reviews For Cherokee Camp
Title: Chapter 15 - How to Fight 01 Dec 2009 11:57 pm
Reviewer: hawkswench (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I do like how you are showing the extremely human side of Snape. That everyone has faults, fears and that sometimes they can overcome the soul that we do destructive things to ourselves.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! A sneak preview of the next chapter is on my homepage!
Title: Chapter 14 – On the way 10 Nov 2009 9:14 pm
Reviewer: Sheila (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hey grugster.

    I just had a little bit of free-time and re-read your story. I simply love it and I think that it is my fav of all your writings. I thought I'd just randomly tell you this to give your ego a little boost :-)))

    Author's Response:

    Yes, I'm always in need for a little boost for my ego. This story gets very different feedback. Some people really like it and some find it horrible. I'm glad that there are people like you and I wish I could update it more often, but my beta is very busy. I'm working on a solution for this problem at the moment.

    Thank you very much for your review! 

Title: Chapter 14 – On the way 21 Oct 2009 1:36 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Why did you have to end there?

    I like how Light Arrow got Severus to talk by 'roasting them to death'.

    I'm curious, when did Snape get a chance to cut himself after they arrived at the camp? They've only been there one day, and I can't recall a time he was ever really alone.

    I'm waiting eagerly for the next chapter!

    Amazing story!

    Author's Response:

    You will find out when he did it in the next chapter!

    Thank you very much for your review! 

Title: Chapter 13 21 Oct 2009 1:24 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    The flashback was sad, but very well written. I really enjoyed it. I want to hug Severus and tell him that everything will be okay.

    Excellent chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 12 – A Crying Girl 21 Oct 2009 1:14 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    LOL. I can just see Harry sitting at the table with his mouth hanging open as everything goes on around him.

    The motherly moments between White Cloud and Severus are very well writen. I hope to see more of them soon.

    Author's Response: :D Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 11 - The First Night 21 Oct 2009 12:53 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    I liked how White Could and Light Arrow handled the nightmare.

    Good chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 10 – The Feast 21 Oct 2009 12:43 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved the conversation between Severus and Draco. As well as Harry and Draco talking about how Severus blames himself. I sense a mushy moment in the future.

    Wonderful chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 10 – The Feast 21 Oct 2009 12:43 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    I loved the conversation between Severus and Draco. As well as Harry and Draco talking about how Severus blames himself. I sense a mushy moment in the future.

    Wonderful chapter!

    Author's Response: Double post and double thank you! :)
Title: Chapter 9 –Harry and Severus 18 Oct 2009 4:23 pm
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry seems a little to...comfortable around Light Arrow. He seems to trust the man a lot and they only just met. I expected his reaction to be more like Severus.

    Snape's actions seem very realistic. He puts distance between himself and White Cloud. Yet after he does something 'stupid' he reacts to her on instinct, following her instructions almost without thought.

    I loved the scene between Severus and White Cloud and hope to see more soon.

    Amazing Chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Harry is quiet at the edge and inwardly he wishs for someone to help him and confort him. That's the reason why he is opening up to Light Arrow so soon. It should have taken maybe a wekk to make it look real but I write my story mostly to handle the stress from my work. Writing this stuff balance me out. Therefore it is soemtimes a bit extrem and unrealistic.

     

Title: Chapter 8 - Draco 18 Oct 2009 4:11 pm
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    *Sniff, Sniff* Poor Draco. I felt really bad for him.

    Excellent Chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!

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