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Reviews For Cherokee Camp
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! A sneak preview of the next chapter is on my homepage!
I just had a little bit of free-time and re-read your story. I simply love it and I think that it is my fav of all your writings. I thought I'd just randomly tell you this to give your ego a little boost :-))) Author's Response: Yes, I'm always in need for a little boost for my ego. This story gets very different feedback. Some people really like it and some find it horrible. I'm glad that there are people like you and I wish I could update it more often, but my beta is very busy. I'm working on a solution for this problem at the moment. Thank you very much for your review!
I like how Light Arrow got Severus to talk by 'roasting them to death'. I'm curious, when did Snape get a chance to cut himself after they arrived at the camp? They've only been there one day, and I can't recall a time he was ever really alone. I'm waiting eagerly for the next chapter! Amazing story! Author's Response: You will find out when he did it in the next chapter! Thank you very much for your review!
Excellent chapter! Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
The motherly moments between White Cloud and Severus are very well writen. I hope to see more of them soon. Author's Response: :D Thank you very much for your review!
Good chapter! Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Wonderful chapter! Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Wonderful chapter! Author's Response: Double post and double thank you! :)
Snape's actions seem very realistic. He puts distance between himself and White Cloud. Yet after he does something 'stupid' he reacts to her on instinct, following her instructions almost without thought. I loved the scene between Severus and White Cloud and hope to see more soon. Amazing Chapter! Author's Response: Harry is quiet at the edge and inwardly he wishs for someone to help him and confort him. That's the reason why he is opening up to Light Arrow so soon. It should have taken maybe a wekk to make it look real but I write my story mostly to handle the stress from my work. Writing this stuff balance me out. Therefore it is soemtimes a bit extrem and unrealistic.
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