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Reviews For Cherokee Camp
Amazing Chapter! Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Wonderful Chapter! Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Good Chapter! Author's Response: I very appreciate that you review on each chapter, Thank you very much for it! I'm not a horse people and hardly have any experiences with horses, so it is a struggle for me to write this scenes. But there will come more. :) Sunny
Good Chapter! Author's Response: :) Thank you very much for your review!!!
The sibling type interaction between Rose and Severus is done perfectly! Wonderful Chapter! Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it the way I wrote it! :)
The scene where Severus calls Harry and Draco 'my boys' was wonderful. It was very touching. Oh, I also enjoy the way Severus can make Harry feel bad/guilty for something just by sounding a little disappointed. Great Chapter! Author's Response: Yes, I imagine Black Hawk sexy as well. But later there will come Crying Horse and he is a really sexy sunnyboy. Black Hawk is more mysterious and manly. :)
I have to say I was very disappointed over the death of Ron. Neville I could have tolorated, but I hate haveing Ron die. I love haveing Snape on a plane and his sarcasm at Draco is great. Author's Response: I don't kow why, but I always have problems writing Ron and I needed Harry to loose someone very close to become as bitter as he is now. Thanks for your opinion! Sunny
While Snape seems to be acting out of character, you give him good reason for it. I love the relationship he has with the family as well as Harry and Draco. I hope there more Harry/Draco and Severus father/son moments in the future. I'm confused about one thing however, who is Rose married to? At first I thought it was Red Horse, but later on I read something that made me think it was Crying Horse. Could you clear that up for me? Anyway, excellent story and I hope to read more soon! Author's Response: I'm also glad you gave it a try. :) Rose is married to Crying Horse. I will check if I made a mistake in one chapter. Thank you for your review!
I'm sorry to hear that your stay in hospital was painfull. I hope you'll recover fast. Author's Response: Thank you for your review!
Author's Response: It's normal that people have relapses. The quality of the program can't be judged by it. Too many factors influence a relapse. As for the joining the Death Eaters: You can grow up in a very loved and safe childhood but when you meet the wrong friends you still can fall for the darkness. I have several people in my head were this happened. For example they started to become criminal or consumated drugs because of the bad influence of frineds. So I don't make the camp responsible for it. People that had experienced very drastric things in there life or have been abused over several years will never forget it, no matter who good a program is. Their experiences will influence their actions and emotions the whole life. The question is just how much. If Severus wouldn't believe that the camp helped him, he wouldn't have brought Draco and Harry there. It is important to have a place were you feel loved and safe, even after a relapse. Thanks for your review! Sunny |
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