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Title: Chapter 7 - I Tried 18 Oct 2009 4:06 pm
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Severus and Draco's talk was very well done. I love the interaction between Severus and 'his boys'. The way Draco flipped out was very realistic.

    Amazing Chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 6 – Separated Ways 18 Oct 2009 4:02 pm
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm glad Draco feels a little more comfortable around Black Hawk. You wrote that scene very well and I could really understand Draco's unease.

    Wonderful Chapter!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
Title: Chapter 5 – Meeting the others 18 Oct 2009 8:09 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Draco's attachment to Severus is sweet. I also enjoyed the scene with Severus and his horse. I hope to see more interaction between them.

    Good Chapter!

    Author's Response:

    I very appreciate that you review on each chapter, Thank you very much for it!

    I'm not  a horse people and hardly have any experiences with horses, so it is a struggle for me to write this scenes. But there will come more. :)

    Sunny

Title: Chapter 4 – How to go on 17 Oct 2009 4:31 pm
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Hehe... poor Severus, being around people who care for him. I can just see him fighting them every step of the way.

    Good Chapter!

    Author's Response: :) Thank you very much for your review!!!
Title: Chapter 3 – The first Shock 17 Oct 2009 4:54 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Harry's panic at being left alone was very belivable and well done. I felt really bad for him, but at the same time understand why they have to be seperated. I love how Harry wants Severus to know if he has a nightmare.

    The sibling type interaction between Rose and Severus is done perfectly!

    Wonderful Chapter!

    Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it the way I wrote it! :)
Title: Chapter 2 - Arrival 17 Oct 2009 4:45 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    I love Black Hawk. I picture him as a large handsome Native American that is quite and a bit scary, but... did I mention sexy?

    The scene where Severus calls Harry and Draco 'my boys' was wonderful. It was very touching.

    Oh, I also enjoy the way Severus can make Harry feel bad/guilty for something just by sounding a little disappointed.

    Great Chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Yes, I imagine Black Hawk sexy as well. But later there will come Crying Horse and he is a really sexy sunnyboy. Black Hawk is more mysterious and manly. :)

     

Title: Chapter 1 – On the Plane 17 Oct 2009 4:38 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    Okay, so I read the whole thing through and left a review for it on chapter 14. But I decided to start over and review each chapter while I wait for an update.

    I have to say I was very disappointed over the death of Ron. Neville I could have tolorated, but I hate haveing Ron die.

    I love haveing Snape on a plane and his sarcasm at Draco is great.

    Author's Response: I don't kow why, but I always have problems writing Ron and I needed Harry to loose someone very close to become as bitter as he is now. Thanks for your opinion! Sunny
Title: Chapter 14 – On the way 14 Oct 2009 12:59 am
Reviewer: DaughterOfAres (Signed) [Report This]
    I confess, I rolled my eyes when I fist read the summary for this story. It seemed...cheesey. I'm not entirely sure what made me give it a chance. But I'm glad I did.

    While Snape seems to be acting out of character, you give him good reason for it. I love the relationship he has with the family as well as Harry and Draco. I hope there more Harry/Draco and Severus father/son moments in the future.

    I'm confused about one thing however, who is Rose married to? At first I thought it was Red Horse, but later on I read something that made me think it was Crying Horse. Could you clear that up for me?

    Anyway, excellent story and I hope to read more soon!

    Author's Response:

    I'm also glad you gave it a try. :)

    Rose is married to Crying Horse. I will check if I made a mistake in one chapter.

    Thank you for your review!

Title: Chapter 14 – On the way 13 Oct 2009 9:49 pm
Reviewer: Sheila (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Awesome chapter!! It really showed that Sev can rely on his "foster parents" - no matter his age or the circumstances that brought him into trouble. Or whether or not he wants their help...
    I'm sorry to hear that your stay in hospital was painfull. I hope you'll recover fast.

    Author's Response: Thank you for your review!
Title: Chapter 14 – On the way 13 Oct 2009 5:43 pm
Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Not sure what I think about Severus needing such extensive help. The hitting of his hand and starting to drink is one thing but extreme cutting is another. Then there is the fact that this is the third time he has been sent to the camp--obviously he has had a stressful job but did the program truly work? It didn't stop him from joining Voldemort which meant he was still a very angry young man! Doesn't seem like it--so why send Harry and Draco?

    Author's Response:

    It's normal that people have relapses. The quality of the program can't be judged by it. Too many factors influence a relapse.

    As for the joining the Death Eaters: You can grow up in a very loved and safe childhood but when you meet the wrong friends you still can fall for the darkness. I have several people in my head were this happened. For example they started to become criminal or consumated drugs because of the bad influence of frineds. So I don't make the camp responsible for it.

    People that had experienced very drastric things in there life or have been abused over several years will never forget it, no matter who good a program is. Their experiences will influence their actions and emotions the whole life. The question is just how much.

    If Severus wouldn't believe that the camp helped him, he wouldn't have brought Draco and Harry there. It is important to have a place were you feel loved and safe, even after a relapse.

    Thanks for your review!

    Sunny


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