Ooh drunk! what will Light arrow say about that?? lol cant wait to find out :)
| Title: Chapter 58 – Serious Talk
| 01 Aug 2011 8:34 pm
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| Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed)
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no sev no please no stay strong please
and aww poor Harry misunderstanding
awesome chapter as always
| Title: Chapter 57 -Relationship or not
| 07 Jul 2011 2:34 am
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| Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed)
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wow this was such a strong chapter very well done well written glad that Melissa is staying strong and draco hugs
YAY another update! it was worth the wait. great chapter, Harry and Melissa's talk with the others was very sweet :D i hope we don't have to wait too long for the next one, as this is my all time fave story. Everytime I see an update from P&S I cross my fingers its this one!
| Title: Chapter 52 - Hermione
| 14 Jun 2011 11:25 pm
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| Reviewer: Tresta (Anonymous)
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This story is amazing; I am really admiring your work and your characters. I am not sure if you have finished it; but please, please do!!! I couldn't bear to be left hanging with this.
If you ever do go back and fill in more of the story - how the boys were hurt etc- that would be interesting, but probably not necessary. I can see your decision to focus on how the boys heal more than how they were hurt, but it would be interesting to see more background in England. How long were they there before Dumbledore decided to send them to America? How did the relationship between Hermione and Draco develop, considering how much they hated each other in canon. Was it because he turned to their side, or was it because she supported him after the dungeon? Those are the kinds of things that would make a good "accessory" story if you have the desire.
just make me cry why don't you?
excellecnt job of writing this chapter!
Thanks for the update.
V.
| Title: Chapter 56 – Harry facing Light Arrow
| 27 May 2011 10:01 am
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| Reviewer: Helene (Anonymous)
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I just found this story and wanted to tell you I found it a great read and am looking forward to the next chapters.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for you review!
| Title: Chapter 1 – On the Plane
| 27 May 2011 9:37 am
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| Reviewer: Km (Anonymous)
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This is ridiculous. There are camps and institutions in the UK that could help them. Putting them in the US is just an obnoxious excuse. Characters never HAVE to be OOC. They can be in character after being raped -- they can act like their characters would. Yours are ridiculously OOC. It would not hurt to put in a little effort.
Author's Response: That's your opinion. Many others see it different. So I will just go on like I did and you go and find another story to read.
| Title: Chapter 56 – Harry facing Light Arrow
| 27 May 2011 3:39 am
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| Reviewer: Hope_06 (Signed)
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that letter is a big step for Harry as is actually opening up and I can understand how hard it is. I never found it easy I too would clam up
you do an amazing job of writing the pain and the triumps realiztically
looking forward to reading more
Author's Response: Thank you very much for you review!
| Title: Chapter 56 – Harry facing Light Arrow
| 27 May 2011 12:27 am
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| Reviewer: Baghi (Signed)
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Augh! More, more! I'm loving this every new installment! Kudos!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for you review!
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