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Reviews For Cherokee Camp
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! :hug:
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review and the birthday wishes! :hug:
Great chapter! I can't wait for the next chapter! I'm sure Black Hawk won't actually hurt him, but you did a great job at building the suspense. Amazing chapter and I can't wait for the next. Happy Birthday! Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review and the birthday wishes! :hug:
Author's Response: You don't need to wait very long. I will update this weekend! :) Thank you very much for your review! :hug:
Author's Response: The next update will be this weekend! Thank you very much for your review and the birthday wishes! :hug:
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review and the birthday wishes!
Author's Response: I know it was a very bad cliffy. Sorry. I try to upload next weekend. Thank you very much for your review and the birthday wishes!
Wow what an intense ending to the chapter. Very well done. Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review and the birthday wishes!
since it is again in the middle of the night and in my holidays I thought I could try a review again. As you can see I found another of your stories and again I like it very much. It is an idea I never read before and is written very well. I do not have background infos about the topic but it seems realistic to me. What I do not really like is the fact, that they are not permitted to use magic at the camp but I see the reasons why it is that way. I hope Harry and Draco will learn a bit wandless magic at some point of the story because I would like to read a bit more magic and I would like to see how wandless magic can be performed and what are the limits within your story. I read some stories with wandless magic before and in the most it was overpowered and not realistic even for it being magic. Kuroi Author's Response: Light Arrow will explain the different between wandless magic and normal magic in a chapter and at least Harry will learn to use it! Thank you very much for your review!
The 'shaving' scene was really sweet. It shows that Black Hawk has made quite a lot of progress in getting Harry to trust him more. The teasing at breakfast only made this group of people seem more like a family, which is good for the boys. Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review! |
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