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Reviews For Taking Umbridge
Title: Teacher Attack! 10 Jun 2009 11:13 am
Reviewer: KimSpiritTalks (Signed) [Report This]
    Very interesting story. I can't wait to see more. Your description of Harry stuffing his things back in his bag was so realistic I knew I was going to be reading a story worth reading, even if I had reservations about the CP warning. Very good story so far. I can't wait to see how Snape takes things.

    Author's Response: I didn't even think much about Harry's schoolbag, but I'm glad it caught your interest. I hate boring starts; the story might end up really good, but with all the chaff out there, sometimes it's too hard to plow through. Thanks for the review!
Title: Teacher Attack! 10 Jun 2009 10:26 am
Reviewer: Dhruva (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hi Thank you so much for responding to my challenge. I loved the story, especially Harry's sarcasm. . . Educational Decree abt wearing pink! Hilarious!!
    And I thought you portrayed Umbridge very well. Great idea abt the type of atttack too. Can't wait for your update!! Thanks again!
    Bye

    Author's Response: It seemed too obvious to make Umbridge the abuser, but she is the most likely candidate. And no doubt she would have caned him if she thought for a second she could get away with it. It was a fun challenge to write, and I appreciate your review!
Title: Teacher Attack! 10 Jun 2009 8:06 am
Reviewer: snarky Beth (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry! Enduring that devil-toad’s abuse; I’m upset and outraged! She needs to have that vile cane shoved down her throat, then be taken away by dementors *grumbles*

    Least now that Snape’s here maybe that b*tch can get what’s coming to her. We just need to wait for him to figure things out…

    *looks hopeful* You've grabbed my attention, so please post more soon?

    Author's Response:

    Ah, I've ensnared another victim. I haven't decided what to do to Umbridge yet . . . but I am working on the next chapter. Thanks for reviewing!

Title: Teacher Attack! 10 Jun 2009 5:55 am
Reviewer: JolisGSD (Signed) [Report This]
    This is a great beginning to a story! I usually don't like cp stories, but now I realize that is because I end up disliking the person who is administering the punishment. But in your story, it's OK since I hate Umbridge anyway (LOL)

    Please update soon. I want to read Snape's reaction to Harry.

    Author's Response: I never thought about it that way . . . if it were Snape or Sirius, we would have to hate them. But with her, nothing changes. :o) I can't make Snape fluffy, but he'll be slightly less snarky than usual when he finds out. Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Teacher Attack! 10 Jun 2009 5:15 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Ooh, I hope Snape gives it to that evil toad and real good.

    Evil bitch.

    Author's Response: I haven't figured out exactly what Snape will do to her, but I'll try to make it good. I can be evil, too. :o) Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Teacher Attack! 10 Jun 2009 5:13 am
Reviewer: Snapesthe1 (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This first chapter was simply excellent! I loved the detail and I sincerely hope the 2nd chapter is quick coming because that was a purely evil cliffhanger:)

    Author's Response: My pleasure. The cliffhanger, I mean. :o) Chapter 2 might seem boring after this kind of action, but so is life, right? Thanks for your review!

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