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Reviews For Taking Umbridge
Title: Not Such a Protector, After All 25 Sep 2009 8:51 am
Reviewer: catherinerickman (Signed) [Report This]
    more please

    Author's Response: An update might just be in the cards pretty soon. :o) Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Not Such a Protector, After All 30 Jul 2009 5:45 pm
Reviewer: NyssaM (Anonymous) [Report This]
    first off- great story! can't wait to read what happens next (hinthint).

    second, there are a couple of mistakes i noticed while reading.
    At the end of the first chapter the person who walks into the bathroom says "Mr. Potter" but in this chapter Snape only says "Potter."

    Also when Snape reaches for Harrys hand and notices the three marks he mentions that its Harry's left hand, his non writing hand. But Umbridge first told him to hold out his right hand and when he hesitated he got an extra hit for 3 total. His left hand only got 2 hits. Snape would have to be reaching for his right hand if he noticed 3 burns.

    IN anycase great work! thanks so much!

    Author's Response:

    *grumbles* That's why I prefer to post on ff.net first, then wait about a week to post here, because then when I make changes I don't have to worry about updating two sites. Originally the hands and names were reversed, and when I changed it over there I forgot to update P&S, so the next chapter didn't fit. I posted this chapter on both simultaneously, which is why that happened. Thanks for reviewing!

Title: Not Such a Protector, After All 05 Jul 2009 6:57 am
Reviewer: hypercell (Signed) [Report This]
    OMG! More? That's it? Ok, it was pretty long, but I want more! Tons more!

    Author's Response: Darn right it was long! Sheesh! At first I was struggling and thought I'd be lucky to get 3,400 words . . . and then I don't know what happened. :o) Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Not Such a Protector, After All 04 Jul 2009 9:12 pm
Reviewer: Doc Brown (Anonymous) [Report This]
    *claps* That was great. Extra points for the scientific mind of Severus.

    Author's Response: I figure he was definitely into chemistry . . . I could see Snape as that kid who makes bombs in his basement while the parents remain blissfully unaware. Thanks for the review!
Title: Not Such a Protector, After All 04 Jul 2009 8:17 pm
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice!! I like!! :-)

    Author's Response: Glad you liked it, and thanks for reviewing!
Title: Not Such a Protector, After All 04 Jul 2009 5:37 pm
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, that was wonderful. You really are a gifted writer, and intelligent too. Science goes right above my head!

    I love how Severus felt guilty about not protecting Harry enough. That was so sweet and unexpected.

    Harry is lucky to have a protector like Severus on his side.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for the compliments! I never in my life expected anyone to even hint that I might be good at science. Not with a straight face, anyway. :o) I was okay with stuff that interested me, but once those three things had been taught, I was kind of lost.

    Still, think about it. According to the Heisenberg theory, observing a phenomenon changes it. Well, how do you know? You can't tell what would happen if you don't watch something unless you watch it! Grrr . . .

    Anyway, I'm not even certain Snape would feel sorry for Harry in canon, even if Umbridge caned him, but it seems to work. Thanks for reviewing!

Title: Teacher Attack! 15 Jun 2009 10:07 am
Reviewer: heartstar (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I love this so far I would love to see where you take this.

    Author's Response: Me, too. :o) I have a pretty good idea of the general outline, but sometimes I'm just as surprised as you guys. Thanks for reviewing!
Title: Teacher Attack! 15 Jun 2009 5:19 am
Reviewer: hypercell (Signed) [Report This]
    This is great! I hope you update soon!

    Author's Response: I'm working on it as we . . . er, speak! :o)
Title: Teacher Attack! 12 Jun 2009 2:21 pm
Reviewer: bridie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow that was so well written! And Umbridge was completely in character as well..

    I think I'm feeling pain in my arm by just reading it lol.

    Can't wait to see what Snape says :)

    Author's Response: Thanks! Umbridge is surprisingly easy to write . . . maybe I'm more like her than I thought? Hmmm . . .
Title: Teacher Attack! 11 Jun 2009 9:54 pm
Reviewer: little-starling (Anonymous) [Report This]
    oooooh she's a right nasty piece of work isnt she? Poor Harry, i was willing him to stay strong through that horrible ordeal which just goes to show how well written it was my dear.. Absolutely brilliant, i can't wait to read more. What will Severus make of the abuse?

    Author's Response: I kind of felt bad for Harry, too, even as I tortured him, but at least that's over with. Now on to the comfort . . . or whatever Snape's version of it is. :o) Thanks for reviewing!

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