Aww. Sad last line. Thinking Harry was Lily was good. And the idea of other nurses was a nice touch.
This is so sad, and beautiful. I really hope that Harry comes out of the coma. I think that what Snape is feeling, although he would never admit it, is guilt.
Great portrayal of Snape - the frustration and the slow, almost unacknowledged change of the way he sees Harry. This is a really, really good (and unsettling in a way) story!
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