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Title: Chapter 1 11 Dec 2009 3:27 am
Reviewer: N_Forest (Signed) [Report This]
    That was interesting. I'm glad that Severus's Occlumency skills allowed him to handle the returning memories and that they came slowly so as too not overwhelm him.

    I'm looking forward to finding out exactly how Lily became pregnant and what Severus plans to do with this new information.

    Great chapter!
Title: Chapter 1 19 Jun 2009 8:20 pm
Reviewer: jvalread (Signed) [Report This]
    So was that the glamour that fell? Hopefully it didn't affect the wards or else there will be a DE attack in the next chapter. I'm sure that Vernon will blame Dudder's problems on Harry somehow. As for the BETA, I'm more than willing to help out if you like. email me @ jvalread @ yahoo .com

    Author's Response: Thanks for the offer, I have two BETAs now, since posting these chapters XD I'm just waiting for them to get back to me before posting Chapter 02! Things will become clear as soon as you read that chapter ^^
Title: Chapter 1 17 Jun 2009 5:25 am
Reviewer: brenanabread (Signed) [Report This]
    Very Impressive, I cannot wait to see the next part.

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ Glad you enjoyed ^^ More soon
Title: Chapter 1 16 Jun 2009 8:04 pm
Reviewer: petuniac3 (Signed) [Report This]
    fabulous story-I am so intriqued

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ More soon
Title: Chapter 1 16 Jun 2009 6:14 pm
Reviewer: Morgansnape87 (Signed) [Report This]
    Good Chapter Keep it up. I like the story so far

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I'm working on the next chapter now ^^
Title: Chapter 1 16 Jun 2009 1:03 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Please post more. This is turning out to be a great story.

    Author's Response: Thanks ^^ I'm writing the next chapter at the moment, hopefully wont take longer than a week to update ^^
Title: Chapter 1 16 Jun 2009 12:37 pm
Reviewer: little-sun (Signed) [Report This]
    This is interesting. Several nice ideas as Severus remembering slowly throughout the year, or Harry being back in his cupboard make it different than the other stories. I am looking forward reading the next chapter. Mila

    Author's Response: Thankyou ^^ Knowing that the Severitus challenge has been so popular, I know many things have already been done - but I hope to make this my own and shake things up a bit ^^ Glad you enjoyed! ^^ I'm working on the next chapter at the moment, so an update should be within the week ^^
Title: Chapter 1 16 Jun 2009 10:35 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    LOVE this so far. I like your writing style. I really like the way the memories are revealed for Severus. Much fun - I'm adding it to my favorites list.

    Author's Response: Thankyou very much! ^^
Title: Chapter 1 16 Jun 2009 10:09 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh my! I can't wait to read more. This is very interesting.

    Go on the shout box and ask if anyone is interested in betaing for you, or there is a place on the top for beta readers apparantly.

    Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it ^^ And thanks for the advice! ^^
Title: Chapter 1 16 Jun 2009 8:46 am
Reviewer: JAM (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is good. Even though it covers previously traveled ground, it is not just a repeat. I really like the idea that Lily "refreshes" Snape's memories gradually, and the fact that he is disconcerted by the changes, even before knowing what they are about, is realistic. Everything he thought he knew is being changed. Please keep writing this story!

    Author's Response: With the Severitus challenge having been so well loved, I know a lot of ground has been trod - but I'm hoping to make this my own and shake things up, even a little ^^ I'm writing the next chapter at the moment, so it shouldn't be too much longer til the next update ^^

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