Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 1 16 Jun 2009 7:44 am
Reviewer: Vicki (Anonymous) [Report This]
    I like this start! I enjoyed how Severus was slowly coming to terms with his returning memories, and your explanation for his behavior at the end of the Occlumency lessons. I hope we get to see more of his improved relationship with Lily, and James as well. You've made the Dursleys' abuse very believable, and I like how trapped Harry feels.

    If you still want a beta, feel free to email me at greeneyes3048@yahoo.com. I'm an accredited beta from Perfect Imagination, and I've betaed for several authors, including some in the HP fandom.

    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you enjoyed it so far ^^ There will be continued snippets given about his recovered memories, so things will be seen, promise!

    Thanks for the BETA offer - I'll email you later about it. 


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