Potions and Snitches
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Title: Chapter 2 11 Dec 2009 3:44 am
Reviewer: N_Forest (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow! I didn't expect Aunt Petunia to be the one to freak out and blame Harry for Dudley's misfortune. It was an interesting turn of events.

    Reading about Harry's way of defeating the Death Eaters was rather gruesome, but effective.

    Great chapter!
Title: Chapter 2 27 Jul 2009 1:37 pm
Reviewer: thedeejay (Signed) [Report This]
    AMAZING!

    The way he tackled those death eaters! I felt sure one would get past him, but wow!

    Author's Response: I'm very glad you enjoyed it ^^ more soon!
Title: Chapter 2 16 Jul 2009 7:13 am
Reviewer: orpheneritus (Signed) [Report This]
    I felt this chapter was an unexpected twist to the usual progression of a 'Snape's your dad' story. I wasn't expecting Petunia to have a heart attack, but I really enjoyed the scene.

    I'm really interested in where you're going with this story so I hope there will be another chapter in the near future.

    Author's Response: You do? It is? Thanks! ^^ I'm very glad you like it - the next chapter will be up soon ^^
Title: Chapter 2 01 Jul 2009 11:20 pm
Reviewer: Taryn (Signed) [Report This]
    -eyes grow wide-

    I'll give you this...piece of string if you update quickly. -poke- -poke-

    In anycase, I am enjoying it.

    Author's Response: *lol* the next chapter is currently with my BETAs and will be up soon ^^
Title: Chapter 2 01 Jul 2009 1:32 pm
Reviewer: Daybreak1591 (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good, everything was very well done, I especially liked the cramped cardboard I always hate it when writers leave that out. I didn't understand the flicker in the mirror. But that must surely be explained in the future.
    Hope you carry on.
    Daybreak

    Author's Response:

    There aregoing to be a number ofthings that won't be explained for a while - stick with it and I'll get to them though XD Glad you enjoyed it so far - next chapter soon

Title: Chapter 2 30 Jun 2009 6:23 pm
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    Jeez. Poor Harry, to lose innocence that way. You've never really killed someone, even if you feel responsible, until you have their blood quite literally on your hands. I'm not surprised that Harry is in shock. Good chapter by the way, quite enjoyed it. I hope you update soon.

    Author's Response: Yupp - there will be repercussions on his mental state - but it's going a way towards making him realise exactly what the war will be like ^^ The next chapter is currently with my BETAs
Title: Chapter 2 29 Jun 2009 5:33 am
Reviewer: mithrilandtj (Signed) [Report This]
    Poor Harry! But hey, he survived! Too bad the 3 DEs were nobodys though. I wish one of the Inner Circle had bought it.
    I love this story! More please!

    Author's Response: The Inner Circle members will make an appearance eventually, don't worry! Next chapter is with my BETAs right now ^^
Title: Chapter 2 29 Jun 2009 5:16 am
Reviewer: writeurlife (Signed) [Report This]
    Wow, the violence was awesome! I'm usually not into that kind of thing, but in this story it didn't seem forced or anything, and it was only a chapter long so I didn't have my stomach churning with worry after. Yay! Harry is the man, by the way. Took out three death eaters with a kitchen knife. Atta boy!

    It was really well written-all three chapters were. No wonder you have a five-frog rating on this story. It's awesome!

    Author's Response: Thankyou - I'm very glad you enjoyed it so far ^^ I'm trying to get Harry a little more realistic and in the right frame of mind for a war - hence this chapter XD though it will take some time!
Title: Chapter 2 29 Jun 2009 1:55 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Omg! Harry did THAT? Yeah, you weren't kidding. It is quite violent. Just didn't think that Harry had it in him.

    Very interesting. I'm looking forward to your next update.

    Author's Response: I give warnings for good reasons XD I'm glad you enjoyed it, though! ^^
Title: Chapter 2 29 Jun 2009 12:39 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    Ick! Ick ick ick! (Not that I don't like this chapter but ewww poor Harry!) He's going to be so screwed up after this...

    Thanks for updating! I like it!! :0)

    Author's Response: He really is XD You just wait and see XD Glad you're enjoying it! ^^

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