Harry can't afford to be mute!
| Title: Chapter 3
| 05 Nov 2009 5:05 pm
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| Reviewer: Akatsukicafe (Anonymous)
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I'm addicted, love it!
You are an amazing writer!
I'm so glad to see another chapter of this story. I am quite enjoying your reveal of Lily and Snape's conception of Harry and I'm quite keen now that Harry and Snape are in the same house to see their progression. I am also picking up a subtle hint of Luna and Harry, if so it is a cute pairing.
Author's Response: Those 'subtle' hinst are a lot less subtle in hte next chapter, believe me - but I'm glad you like the idea ^^ It's a pairing I rather liked and wanted to try it out ^^ I just hope more readers stick with it and give it a chance! There is also a lot more to come from Lily and Severus and just exactly what they did. I am glad you're enjoying the fic and thanks for the review ^^
*grumps softly* I had a nice, long review written out earlier, but the library computer wouldn't let me post it. So I will just say two words on this chapter: Love It!
Author's Response: Awww now I'm curious as to waht you were trying to say ^^ Long reviews are win ^^ I'm very glad you're enjoying my fic though! ^^
Wonderful, wonderful chapter! I LOVE this story! The trauma-induced muteness reminds me of Michael and Kristina on General Hospital, though it was more semi-catatonia with them (sorry - I love that show and I adored those characters back them, such cute kids, I run the official fansite for one of the actors now). I can not wait for more!
Author's Response: I have never seen General Hospital, so I wouldn't know o.o But I'm glad you're enjoying it ^^
| Title: Chapter 3
| 06 Aug 2009 7:14 am
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| Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous)
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For an intelligent man and a spy how could the fact that Harry needs and is currently missing spectacles slip pass Snape? Minor details are what makes a spy great or dead.
Author's Response: He's not missing them, he jsut wasn't wearing them in his sleep o0 Most people don't - I suppose I should go back and put that in somewhere c.c
I like!!! I really like that Harry is mute. It's a cool idea, and presents unique challenges. I also like your Snape - he seems like canon Snape, but in an unusual situation that requires him to be more careful, kinder. Well done, and I can't wait for more. :0)
Author's Response: I'm very glad you're enjoying it ^^ And I'm so glad Snape is coming across alright, I've actually never written him before starting on this - thanks! ^^
Aw, poor Harry, but I'm really glad that Snape is changing his perception of him.
I'm glad you're back and looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: It'll take some time, but they'll learn to like each other eventually XD And thanks - more soon, hopefully ^^
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