Potions and Snitches
Snape and Harry Gen Fanfiction Archive

Title: Chapter 3 08 Aug 2009 4:57 pm
Reviewer: orpheneritus (Signed) [Report This]
    I'm so glad to see another chapter of this story. I am quite enjoying your reveal of Lily and Snape's conception of Harry and I'm quite keen now that Harry and Snape are in the same house to see their progression. I am also picking up a subtle hint of Luna and Harry, if so it is a cute pairing.

    Author's Response: Those 'subtle' hinst are a lot less subtle in hte next chapter, believe me - but I'm glad you like the idea ^^ It's a pairing I rather liked and wanted to try it out ^^ I just hope more readers stick with it and give it a chance! There is also a lot more to come from Lily and Severus and just exactly what they did. I am glad you're enjoying the fic and thanks for the review ^^
Title: Chapter 3 07 Aug 2009 12:30 am
Reviewer: Baghi (Signed) [Report This]
    *grumps softly* I had a nice, long review written out earlier, but the library computer wouldn't let me post it. So I will just say two words on this chapter: Love It!

    Author's Response: Awww now I'm curious as to waht you were trying to say ^^ Long reviews are win ^^ I'm very glad you're enjoying my fic though! ^^
Title: Chapter 3 06 Aug 2009 7:55 am
Reviewer: B00kw0rm92 (Signed) [Report This]
    Wonderful, wonderful chapter! I LOVE this story! The trauma-induced muteness reminds me of Michael and Kristina on General Hospital, though it was more semi-catatonia with them (sorry - I love that show and I adored those characters back them, such cute kids, I run the official fansite for one of the actors now). I can not wait for more!

    Author's Response: I have never seen General Hospital, so I wouldn't know o.o But I'm glad you're enjoying it ^^
Title: Chapter 3 06 Aug 2009 7:14 am
Reviewer: Elfwyn (Anonymous) [Report This]
    For an intelligent man and a spy how could the fact that Harry needs and is currently missing spectacles slip pass Snape? Minor details are what makes a spy great or dead.

    Author's Response: He's not missing them, he jsut wasn't wearing them in his sleep o0 Most people don't - I suppose I should go back and put that in somewhere c.c
Title: Chapter 3 06 Aug 2009 4:17 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    I like!!! I really like that Harry is mute. It's a cool idea, and presents unique challenges. I also like your Snape - he seems like canon Snape, but in an unusual situation that requires him to be more careful, kinder. Well done, and I can't wait for more. :0)

    Author's Response: I'm very glad you're enjoying it ^^ And I'm so glad Snape is coming across alright, I've actually never written him before starting on this - thanks! ^^
Title: Chapter 3 06 Aug 2009 1:28 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, poor Harry, but I'm really glad that Snape is changing his perception of him.

    I'm glad you're back and looking forward to the next chapter.

    Author's Response: It'll take some time, but they'll learn to like each other eventually XD And thanks - more soon, hopefully ^^
Title: Chapter 2 27 Jul 2009 1:37 pm
Reviewer: thedeejay (Signed) [Report This]

    The way he tackled those death eaters! I felt sure one would get past him, but wow!

    Author's Response: I'm very glad you enjoyed it ^^ more soon!
Title: Chapter 2 16 Jul 2009 7:13 am
Reviewer: orpheneritus (Signed) [Report This]
    I felt this chapter was an unexpected twist to the usual progression of a 'Snape's your dad' story. I wasn't expecting Petunia to have a heart attack, but I really enjoyed the scene.

    I'm really interested in where you're going with this story so I hope there will be another chapter in the near future.

    Author's Response: You do? It is? Thanks! ^^ I'm very glad you like it - the next chapter will be up soon ^^
Title: Chapter 2 01 Jul 2009 11:20 pm
Reviewer: Taryn (Signed) [Report This]
    -eyes grow wide-

    I'll give you this...piece of string if you update quickly. -poke- -poke-

    In anycase, I am enjoying it.

    Author's Response: *lol* the next chapter is currently with my BETAs and will be up soon ^^
Title: Chapter 2 01 Jul 2009 1:32 pm
Reviewer: Daybreak1591 (Signed) [Report This]
    Very good, everything was very well done, I especially liked the cramped cardboard I always hate it when writers leave that out. I didn't understand the flicker in the mirror. But that must surely be explained in the future.
    Hope you carry on.

    Author's Response:

    There aregoing to be a number ofthings that won't be explained for a while - stick with it and I'll get to them though XD Glad you enjoyed it so far - next chapter soon

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