Oh dear! Has this never been finished???????
I am going to cry...
I know it's a long time since you've updated this and you're probably not even on this site any more, but this is one of the most coherent and dramatic stories I've read in a long time. I'd love to see how it goes from here! You've done really well showing how damaged Harry is from his upbringing – always trying to please people and always interpreting whatever people say in the most rejective way possible. I want to see how Severus comes to terms with this.
Also, why not have Dumbledore use his Elder Wand to mend Harry's wand, as Harry does in canon?
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| 02 Feb 2016 9:19 pm
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| Reviewer: Anna (Anonymous)
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I absolutly love this!! You are an Amazing writer. This is without a doubt One of the best, Most interessant, thrilling and in Charakter fanfiction Stories I ever read. I cried several times. . . More would
Be fantastic, any Chance :)?
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| 16 Dec 2015 12:39 am
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| Reviewer: jcj58 (Anonymous)
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I so wish you could finish this story. I have spent the day reading it, and loved every chapter!
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| 07 Apr 2014 9:49 am
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| Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous)
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Absolutely brilliant! This is the most amazing story. Too bad it is under HP because you totally own this - it could be yours to publish.
So hoping you'll continue to post.
More please? More more more!
Aw, I'm so glad that Sev and Harry seem to be working things out, although I wish that more of the truth would be told on both sides; I'm afraid it will all back fire on them both.
'Great chappie Can't wait for the next.
Arh I'm so glad u updated! And such a long chapter, what a treat :) really intrigued now, what does the not so invisible wand mean hmmmm..
Looking forward to whatever fabulous ending you devise.
C xx
I love this story and I can't wait to read more - I hope Snape and Harry get closer and I hope to see more of Sirius
BTW how long do you intend this story to be?
Author's Response: It's nearing the end- maybe 50k more words but I also plan on writing an epilogue... so it's a bit up in air. Glad you're enjoying it so far :)
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