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Title: What lies ahead 25 Mar 2011 3:40 pm
Reviewer: Mess of me (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Hey! I'm the daughter of a grammar teacher and it really gets on my nerves when someone dosn't punctuate correctly. You know tha quotation marks? They look like "this", not 'this'. It makes it hard to read with 'this'. Okay? Thanks for reading my reveiw.

    Author's Response:

    FYI cut and pasted from wikipedia:

    Traditionally, a quotation mark is written as a pair of opening and closing marks in either of two styles: single (‘…’) or double ("…"). Both styles are common in the English language; however, the single and double styling is considered to be the standard in British and American English respectively.

    I have actually switched to using ("...") in later chapters, but technically ('...') *isn't* wrong.

Title: What lies ahead 02 Jan 2011 10:48 am
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed) [Report This]
    You're writing is very good. I like it very much so far! Keep it up!
Title: What lies ahead 29 Dec 2009 8:14 pm
Reviewer: spiritualwitch (Signed) [Report This]
    You spelled Gryffindor wrong but I can ignore that in favor of the awesomeness of the chapter :D. I do love Snape though sometimes he can be a bastard.
Title: What lies ahead 29 Aug 2009 5:20 pm
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    Sirius is great! Snape is really harsh too, which is probably quite IC. Will Harry break through his shields? I will read on to see what happens.

    Author's Response:

    Hey thanks for reviewing:)

    Yeah I'm trying to keep Snape IC (therefore quite a git!) throughout this...

    Hmm occlumency will be quite a big thing throughout this fic -have to see if Harry does manage to break through!

    Hope you like the other chapters:)

     

Title: What lies ahead 29 Jun 2009 12:04 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Aw, sneaky Severus! :)

    I'm glad that these were only threats after all, and that he wouldn't follow through on starving or beating Harry. I really hope that they can eventually get along.

    I'm off to read the next chappie. Oh btw, I like how you keep the Snape and Harry in character.

    Author's Response: Well I have just posted another chapter and I hope you won't hate Severus cos he says some unforgiveable things and really scares Harry... I have plans though and the turning point is near as they are going to start understanding eachother better soon. Thanks loads for your review :)
Title: What lies ahead 28 Jun 2009 11:14 pm
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed) [Report This]
    Really good chapter! I love how Harry is going to be an animagus! I wonder what animal he will be? Snape seems to be very in character too! Loving it so far!

    Author's Response: Thank you. Yes Harry will manage to become an animagus but not for a while! I know what he's going to be but can't say as it will be crucial to the plot (and give too much away) later on... Thanks for reviewing :)

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