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Title: Sirius 29 Apr 2011 1:27 am
Reviewer: summer (Signed) [Report This]
    I swear that I would be crying right now if my sister weren't right here
Title: Sirius 18 Mar 2011 5:19 am
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) [Report This]
    OH NO, not Sirius!! I LOVED the milk incident - that was so funny! Perfect Snape!
Title: Sirius 29 Aug 2009 11:59 pm
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    Whats the MLG? Good update. x

    Author's Response:

    Um, think that was supposed to be MLE- Magical Law Enforcement e.g. aurors :)

Title: Sirius 03 Aug 2009 12:18 am
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed) [Report This]
    Best chapter so far, Harry's grief is understandable and I think the fights are realistic despite his fear because of how messed up his head and emotions are right now. I definitely agree that Snape wouldn't do a Dumbledore! I think this chapter would have been SO hard to write but you pulled it off perfectly!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much. You're right- this was a bit of a nightmare because I couldn't decide if Snape was reacting too harshly or softly...

    It was this chapter that 1st gave me the idea for this fic actually because I was thinking about how Snape might react and thought it would be an interesting starting point (although it's actually taken me ages to get to this point lol)

Title: Sirius 29 Jul 2009 2:07 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh wow, fantastic chapter, but how sad that Sirius had to die. :(

    Loved Snape's control and yet you keep him in character. Don't worry, you've done a great job with it.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you - glad you liked it. Yeah poor Harry no wonder he's an emotional wreck:(  

    This is probably the chapter I've deliberated over most in terms of how Snape would act so I'm glad you don't think he's OOC.  

Title: Sirius 29 Jul 2009 1:18 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    Very nice!! I like!!! I think both Harry and Sev's reactions are realistic and in-character. I think that, as a spy, Snape would be able to hold his temper if he actually tried - we just haven't seen him try in canon. One thing, though - you haven't confirmed that Sirius is dead, and I'm really hoping you leave him dead. I hate it when authors 'kill' someone for drama's sake, but don't actually have him dead. I mean, it's your fic, so if that's the plan then stick to it, but I personally think Sirius should stay dead. Anyway, thanks for the fun chappie, keep writing. :-)

    Author's Response:

    lol I just had a review on fanfiction begging me to 'make Sirius be alive', all I'm saying is it's deliberately ambiguous but that doesn't necessarily mean your concern is going to come true (just that a degree of uncertainity will play a role in the plot in a few chapters time).

    Anyway glad you liked it. Yes Snape can keep his temper if he really wants to.He has to be an amazing actor in front of Voldermort after all.

     

Title: Sirius 28 Jul 2009 7:20 am
Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) [Report This]
    love this story so much!

    Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you like it. Hope you like the next chapter too :)
Title: Sirius 27 Jul 2009 12:45 pm
Reviewer: bridie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    This is probably my favourite chapter so far and the one where Snape and Harry are both MOST in character if you ask me.

    I think it's reasonable the way Harry is feeling and smashing things up is definitely something which he would do. I think it would have been VERY OOC if Snape had not lost his temper this time. And you mention that Harry thinks that Snape had been decent to him, then is he really that scared of him anymore?
    He seems to have managed to do quite a few things by now without getting Snape angry, does he maybe think that Snape is relatively harmless now?

    Snape does not seem too soft, but I doubt he would want Harry to think that he has somehow "won" and let him get away with smashing his house up like that... Afterall, Snape has a large amount of pride too.

    But yeah, that's just my opinion. Keep up the good writing and I can't wait until the next chapter :)

    Author's Response:

    Thanks for your review :) You're right that Harry is overcoming  his fear of Snape - that was the last chapter when he is really scared of him (its only gone on this long because of his experiences with his uncle still playing on his mind). I thought that Harry would still do all these things, despite his fear because he is kind of in self destruction mode.

    He he yes Snape has his pride to uphold and I always think of him as keeping his temper despite having an urge to throttle Harry from time to time.  

     Hope you like the next chapter :)

Title: Sirius 27 Jul 2009 10:38 am
Reviewer: fizzywizzy2006 (Signed) [Report This]
    perfect. not overdone at all. snape doesnt seem OOC at all and Harrys temper is kind of to be expected too, eaven through his fear. well done

    Author's Response: Thank you :) It  was really hard to strike that balance between Snape letting things go because he knows Harry is genuinely distraught and times when I felt he just wouldn't stand by and let him get away with stuff. I'm glad you think it wasn't OOC. :)

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