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Title: No less than the trees and the stars 30 Aug 2009 12:07 am
Reviewer: tabbycat (Signed) [Report This]
    What a great idea of Snape's! I loved his remark: '‘I can’t do it when you hover like that.’ Harry muttered.

    ‘You can’t seem to do it anyway.’ Severus replied cuttingly.' ;D

    Author's Response:

    Brewing potions always makes Snape feel better and he can't think of what else to do with Harry!

    Yeah he's never been one for praise and encouragement lol  :)

Title: No less than the trees and the stars 03 Aug 2009 12:23 am
Reviewer: angelauthor14 (Signed) [Report This]
    Your writing is so natural.

    That's such a short review, but it just sums everything up. It's natural and...real.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you and again thanks so much for taking the trouble to do so many reviews. It really makes a difference to me and I'm getting close to the magic 50 reviews point. (Not quite sure why that's magic lol but it seems like a huge milestone to me!)

Title: No less than the trees and the stars 31 Jul 2009 5:29 pm
Reviewer: Cai (Anonymous) [Report This]
    It's going really well, I like the way you keep Snape in character so well whilst still showing how he and Harry are beginning to develop their respect for one another.

    There are a few scattered grammar and spelling mistakes throughout the story, but the one I keep spotting is "Gryffindor" misspelled with two "Y"s. Anyway, good luck and keep writing.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you :) I hope I still manage to keep Snape in character in the next chapter. He is alternating between 'Harry' and 'Potter' all the time depending on his mood at the time but I hope this doesn't just seem confused!!

    Yes my spelling is atrocious I'm afraid - you don't even want to know the state this fic would be in without spell check sorting some of them out! I promise I will go through and sort some of these out at some point soon. I just don't want to forget what I'm planning to write in the next chapters by holding off on writing them if that makes sense...

     

     

Title: No less than the trees and the stars 29 Jul 2009 10:47 am
Reviewer: bridie (Anonymous) [Report This]
    Wow that was a quick update..

    I liked this one. I liked how Dumbledore explained to Snape how Harry must be feeling, to keep him from becoming too angry with him. And yeah, I can't really think of much more to say about this one, but great writing and I can't wait to read the next one :)

    Author's Response:

    Cheers. Yeah the chat with DD wasn't even gonna be part of it but just wrote itself really. There will be more of him in the next chapter or two :)

    Thanks for reviewing:)

Title: No less than the trees and the stars 29 Jul 2009 8:13 am
Reviewer: hpfanficfan (Signed) [Report This]
    great chapter. things are looking up finally.

    Author's Response:

    Thank you :) Yes they are beginning to really respect and (dare I say it) care about eachother now. Having said that neither of them make it easy for eachother at times!

     

Title: No less than the trees and the stars 29 Jul 2009 2:15 am
Reviewer: Pandora (Signed) [Report This]
    Oh that was very well handled. I'm impressed with Snape AND with you. Great chappie!

    Update soon please!

    Author's Response:

    Yeah I thought it was about time Snape told Harry he would never send him back to the Dursleys. He should never have said that in the first place but his bark is worst than his bite (mostly anyway!)

    Cheers for the review :)

Title: No less than the trees and the stars 29 Jul 2009 1:24 am
Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) [Report This]
    LOL go Sev!! He's so confused, but he's reacting pretty well, anyway. Calmly, at least. And go Dumbledore! :-)

    Author's Response:

    He he well Snape did actually intend to have a go at Harry when he went up to see him but isn't so good at dealing with all the crying lol. I based the 'ignoring him completely' until he's stopped crying bit on my mate who lives in an all-male household where they just don't talk about emotions at all. Though in a way getting Harry to make potions was Snape trying to be nice cos that's what he would choose to do if he was upset :) 


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