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Reviews For My Enemy's Enemy
Author's Response: I was going to write it differently at first and have Snape mend the broom but then I decided it would have a bit more bite if he couldn't undo his action and had to cope with feeling guilty and Harry being upset... :(
The footstep "dreams" make me nervous. I really want to read what happens next. Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review. I'm glad it seemed sad cos I thought to myself when I was writing it what would be the most hurtful thing Snape might do at this stage in the story... pretty harsh stuff. He will apologise - but not for a while yet, I have that bit planned out! The latest chapter veers away from the 'dreams' & Harry's grief for Sirius but these will be picked up again shortly.
I refuse to believe Sirius is dead by the way, even if you don't add a twist that he is really okay (which I'm still hoping you will) in my mind I will have a nice happy ending. Even though if you don't have a Sirius-lives ending I expect you will have a happy Snape-Harry-Guardian ending which would be sweet too. Ohhhh, wonder what is going to happen "tomorrow"!!! Like Snape's guilt by the way and his very Slytherin 'let-someone-else-take-the-rap-with-old-Voldie-ploy'. I seem to like -'s today, how annoying. Can't wait for the next chapter! I have to actually WAIT now *sobs* Pressing the "next" button was so much better. Author's Response: Yes apart from actually attacking Harry Snape probably couldn't have hurt him any more if he'd tried. Not very nice and he wasn't even trying to be particularly nasty. So quite an achievement really. I did consider having Snape know the perfect spell to repair the broomstick but thought that would be too easy on him. Ah Sirius... I've had a few reviews requesting alternately for him to be stay dead/turn out to be alive... I won't say too much other than to say that a degree of uncertainity about Sirius' fate will play a part in following chapters. That doesn't necessarily mean that he will end up being alive however... we will have to wait and see how it unfolds. Whatever happens you can be assured that you will find out more about what he was trying to do and it will play a part in the plot - he hasn't just gone off to Ireland to get him out of the way so Harry and Snape can be forced to spend time together! He he I get that with '-' sometimes or italics or occasionally particular words which creep into a paragraph repeatedly :)
Great chapter, I'm anxious to know too what's going to happen tomorrow! :) Author's Response: Thanks for the review:) Yes Snape can still be a right git when he wants to be can't he? I did consider having Snape know the right spell to repair it but decided that would be too easy. He feels guilty now and that's only going to increase... A key part of the plot's coming up in the next chapter... watch this space :)
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